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This poem recounts my life-changing motorcycle accident in 1979. Set against the backdrop of roaring engines and wind-blown hair, this gripping narrative takes you on a journey through the twists and turns of fate, exploring themes of courage, survival, and spiritual awakening. My descriptive poem captures the essence of a harrowing experience and the profound lessons learned along the way. Climb aboard my 1978 KZ1000 Kawasaki as our journey takes us into the depths of human strength and perseverance, inviting discovery of the power of the human spirit in the face of adversity.

Blessings,
Daniel

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In seventy-eight, my steel-stallion, KZ1000, pride, wind in my hair. Its Sissy Bar, firm tether, bag secured, my wanderlust's prayer. Sun, snow, wind sculpt my journey's theme, my odyssey untamed, my spirit free, No car to claim, just two wheels' flight, a bond profound, betwixt the road and me. Leave Greencastle's eve, the welder's toil, a tale of twilight's dire befold, Blinking lights, a train's advance, a moment's halt, a saga yet foretold. Screeching car, a death-jarring shake, rearview mirrors, dread's reflection bred. As fate converges, metal twists, a dance macabre, my destiny misled. Pinned forward, toward the rails, a silent thought, a desperate plea ensnared. "Dearest Lord, if neath this train I must go, let fate be swift, or let this useless life be spared." Suddenly, wrenching twist, a steel's lament, the bike recoils, my body flung on high, Into the dark night, into the void, 'neath moonless skies, where stars dare shy, and… Angels cry as they watch on high… Dazed, battered, senses reel, vision blurred, the drunk driver looms, a specter dark, His question asked, guilt confessed, coward's plea, a lost soul’s slur remarked. Surging anger, ablaze with words, I confront, to reclaim my right. He retreats, locks doors in fear, a refuge found in a coward's night. Ambulance's glow, sirens' wail, a chaos whirls, scene in frenzy's surge. Minutes fleeting, dreams dispersed, in aftermath's unsettling dirge. Pride and joy, now wreckage lain, midst the ruin, a tale reclaimed, Helmet shattered, head unscathed, a guardian's unseen hold. Roll bars and wallet, armor stout, a soldier's shield, a guardian's plea, Army jacket, steadfast friend, protecting, unshredded flesh… a testament to destiny. A herniated disc, a fate's decree, a stark reminder of what could be, Yet in the wreckage, in the pain, an Angels hymn, "To God be the Glory! Amen and Amen!" Through shadows deep, in trials vast, a journey shaped, by destiny's measured degree… My Kawasaki, loyal steed, a testament to resilience, to life's mystery. In reverie, I ponder fate, the twists of life, the paths unknown. In echoes of that fateful night, a prayer answered, my spirit at last has grown. For every twist, each turn, each scar, I learned that strength lies… not in steel or car, For life remains, a fragile thread, a brush with death, a lesson read, a new life reborn. Now the road unwinds, a winding maze, with knee-bent gratitude, I will forever sing His glory and praise!

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Date: 3/24/2024 6:49:00 PM
He comes through the times we aren't even sure he would. I'm grateful for your life. "Dearest Lord, if neath this train I must go, let fate be swift, or let this useless life be spared." Pure and heartfelt prayer. Cheers Daniel.
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Date: 3/25/2024 6:38:00 AM
Dear Tonye, I am so appreciative of your comments, and yes, the God Lord took care of me then and now. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 3/23/2024 12:53:00 PM
Daniel, So sorry your riding bliss was stolen. I ride those 4 legged off road vehicles. I did own a Z1000, but only passengered on it. My sis however was a top Kawasaki sales person in California. Won a trip to Japan in the 80s. She was also a dirt bike racer and worked for Kenny Roberts. She said that most of her friends as she got older stopped riding roads or they died. Why? Its not the bikes... its the cars. So many senseless deaths. She stopped riding road bikes 20 years ago. HUGS You
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Date: 3/23/2024 5:14:00 PM
Dear Susan, your heartfelt response touched me deeply. Your experiences with motorcycles, shared through your sister's journey, shed light on the joys and dangers of riding. It's a reminder of the fragility of life amidst the thrill of the open road. Your words echo the importance of cherishing every moment. Thank you for sharing your story. Hugs back to you. Blessings my friend, Daniel
Date: 3/22/2024 7:51:00 PM
Amen to that. This is so emotionally captivating. It takes courage to share such a traumatic experience. You had me from start to finish. I’m glad your outcome was a positive one.
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Date: 3/23/2024 9:06:00 AM
Dear Richard, Thank you sincerely for your heartfelt words. Sharing my experience indeed required some courage, but the support I receive, especially from kind souls like you, makes it worthwhile. I’m grateful for your empathy and encouragement. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/22/2024 4:46:00 PM
A FAV, my friend and a Praise God and his angels of mercy! Very engaging poetry, Daniel, I too have been saved by the mercy of God, once from death by motorcycle, the other from car crash after hitting a telephone pole at over a hundred mph. I'll try to soup mail you about my miracles my dear friend. Thank you for sharing yours. Have a great weekend! Bill
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Date: 3/23/2024 9:04:00 AM
Hello Bill, Your words touched me deeply. It's incredible how God's mercy works in our lives, isn't it? I'm grateful for your friendship and for sharing your own miracles. Let's definitely connect via Soup Mail soon. Wishing you a weekend filled with blessings and joy. - Daniel
Date: 3/22/2024 4:38:00 PM
I enjoyed your poetic write of quite the dramatic tale, with nothing left out. Such suspense, yet so many positives you remember from this. So many stories out there, and variety, and thank you for sharing this one.
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Date: 3/23/2024 9:02:00 AM
Hello David, your words mean a lot to me. I'm glad you enjoyed the dramatic tale I shared and found the suspense engaging. Despite the twists and turns, I'm grateful for the positives that shine through. Indeed, there are countless stories waiting to be told, each with its own unique flavor. Thank you for appreciating and encouraging my true life storytelling. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/21/2024 6:38:00 PM
What an incredible poetic theme of strength and spirituality, god bless you Daniel, Kelli
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Date: 3/22/2024 4:16:00 AM
Dear Kelli, thank you for stopping by and leaving such a wonderful comment. It is so appreciated. - Blessings, my friend, Daniel
Date: 3/21/2024 11:44:00 AM
I closely relate to your experience Daniel. I saw road rash, broken bones, and death in my circle – near misses and close calls. Divine intervention in some, destiny in others. Perhaps a mix of both. The risk was worth the feeling of freedom. Perseverance, strength, faith. I enjoyed the tension-build to a life reborn. :)
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Date: 3/21/2024 3:08:00 PM
Dearest Linda, Thank you for your raw and wonderful reflections. Yes, the blend of peril and liberation, fate and resilience, creates a whole life of human experience. Thank you for sharing your journey—it's a testament to the beauty found amid chaos. - Blessings, my friend. - Daniel
Date: 3/21/2024 7:27:00 AM
A miraculous escape from the steely jaws of death, a new found faith in every breath, Such valuable lessons learned
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Date: 3/21/2024 9:02:00 AM
Hello Joe, Thank you for your affirmative comments and I appreciate them very much. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/21/2024 6:44:00 AM
Daniel, this story is intriguing--I hung on on every word, and we are all glad that you are OK. I used a Vespa during high school, so I know the feeling of freedom and pleasure riding provides and why you continue to ride. The comments are all very interesting too. Your poem has opened up a discussion of risk tolerance and risk management. Few people analyze the risks of daily activities all that carefully. It's a big deal in aviation and health care. This is a public service poem of value!
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Date: 3/21/2024 9:02:00 AM
Hello, Duke. Your heartfelt feedback on my poem touched me deeply. Thank you for recognizing the layers beyond the words. Your shared experience with the Vespa adds richness to the narrative. It's heartening to know my poem sparked discussions on risk, echoing its importance across domains. Your words validate the essence of my work. Blessings My Friend, Daniel.
Date: 3/21/2024 1:36:00 AM
Glad that you survived the accident and was able to write about it. On the road, motorcycles are definitely dangerous or in more dangerous than some vehicles. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Date: 3/21/2024 4:27:00 AM
Dear Sara, Thank you for your affirmative comments. Yes, I agree with you that motorcycles are less safe than cars for many reasons. I still love the feel of the open road, and I do not recommend it to everyone. Blessings, my friend! - Daniel
Date: 3/21/2024 12:41:00 AM
This, despite being a traumatic event in your life, was transformative. Well written
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Date: 3/21/2024 4:25:00 AM
Hello Marugu, I am thankful you stopped by and left a comment. Have a great day. Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 6:55:00 PM
A beautiful tribute. Full of thankfulness, and it took me on your life's path and journey from so long ago...thanks for sharing it. :)
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Date: 3/21/2024 4:25:00 AM
Dear, Paige, Thank you for your wonderful note and I am always grateful. Yes, it was decades ago and it certainly changed my path in life. - Blessings, my friend! - Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 3:16:00 PM
what a traumatic experience, but you write about it so effectively and vividly, had me gripped throughout..thanks for your comment on my latest post
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:44:00 PM
Dear Charlotte, thank your for you wonderful comments and I appreciate your visit and loved reading you poem. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 2:39:00 PM
Oh dear poet, how true your words ring in my heart, we sometimes have a turning point in life when suddenly we are wide awake, and grateful, walking in the light of day, we can feel the ray, better than we did before, thank you for sharing your experience, I was giving birth to my daughter in 1979, :)
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:42:00 PM
Dear Rose, your heartfelt response to my poem deeply touched me. It's remarkable how life's turning points can awaken us to newfound gratitude and clarity. Your mention of giving birth to your daughter in 1979 adds a beautiful layer of personal connection to the theme of new beginnings. Thank you for sharing your touching experience. - Blessings, my friend! - Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 12:28:00 PM
True words right there . So nicely written .
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:40:00 PM
Dear TAR, I appreciate your visit and your kind words. Blessings, my friend! - Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 11:26:00 AM
Twist of fate, a dangerous situation, shame on drunk drivers. A prayer saves, healing power in time. A motorcycle helmet an essential piece of safety you well know. A motorcycle run I went on in ’86, 75% Harley’s an anti-helmet run, for Skull cap half helmets, above the ear. My first motorcycle burn on a Yamaha in'82, learning quickly Not to lean with the bike after a ride, pipes are hot! Yours a dreadful event, compelling, intriguing inspirational piece of Bio, loss of a beautiful bike thank you for sharing
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Date: 3/20/2024 11:33:00 AM
Cheers to a new life reborn, Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 10:58:00 AM
Such a scary moment in your life. truly the lord was with you. Great write with moving emotions and imagery.
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Date: 3/20/2024 11:11:00 AM
Dear Eve, Thank you so much for your note, and yes, the Lord is my savior from so many angles. - Blessings, my friend, - Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 9:23:00 AM
A memory not to be forgotten. I have never ridden a motorcycle. We have too many of them in Malta and many die. Please be careful.
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Date: 3/20/2024 11:11:00 AM
Hello Victor, Thank you for your note! Yes, you are right that motorcycles can be dangerous for multiple reasons, including Drivers not Seeing us or Driving wildly, which I do not do anymore. I am too old to be wild on a motorbike. - Blessings, Victor, - Daniel
Date: 3/20/2024 5:39:00 AM
Wow! That must have felt terrible at the time, though I'm glad you have found peace with God, Daniel:) gripping narrative with bone-chilling astuteness...
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Date: 3/20/2024 6:23:00 AM
Dear Joana, I appreciate your beautiful comments. Sometimes, it seems like yesterday it all happened. However, it reminds me of the fragility of life and that God is in control, and I am not. - Blessings, my dear friend! - Daniel
Date: 3/19/2024 9:01:00 PM
Unpredictable are the twists and turns of life. When I read the story of your narrow escape from the claws of death, my hair stood on end. What a life-shattering moment it was! But God didn't want you to drown in despair. With stoic courage, perseverance, and resilience, you fought and came back to life, to change the course of your life through a well-charted track...not as the old self, but as one with an illumined spirit with an ever-grateful heart for the providence and grace He shows to you every day. The young man who raced on his steel stallion with the wind in his hair became a sedate man ever singing glory and praise to the Lord. Inspiring story, beautifully told, dear Daniel.
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:33:00 AM
Dear Valsa, your heartfelt reflection on my poem encapsulates the transformative power of resilience and gratitude. I love how you acknowledge the profound journey of overcoming adversity with courage and faith. Thank you for your eloquent praise highlighting the beauty in embracing life's challenges and finding peace in spiritual growth. Valsa, your compassionate response is the strength found in vulnerability and the enduring grace of the human spirit. - Blessings, my dear friend! - Daniel
Date: 3/19/2024 4:13:00 PM
Wow Daniel....a brush with death like that would be terrifying.... leaving long term scars both physically and mentally. Its moments and times like that when we come face to face with the vulnerability and fragility of life that we stop and take hold and appreciate life and what we have... like you said " life's fragile thread"! Thankyou for sharing your excellent poem my friend! Debx
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Date: 3/19/2024 6:48:00 PM
Dear Deb, I loved your empathy and understanding of the profound impact of such experiences which are truly comforting. It's in moments like these that we confront our own mortality and find strength in our vulnerability. Your appreciation for life's fragility mirrors my own sentiments. Deb, thank you for your kind words and for recognizing the essence of my poem. They mean a great deal to me, my dear friend. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/19/2024 1:44:00 PM
As fate converges, metal twists, a dance macabre, my destiny misled… a refuge found in a coward's night… Minutes fleeting, dreams dispersed, in aftermath's unsettling dirge…Love your faith amidst even your prayer to be taken quick or to be saved. Thanks for sharing, dear one…
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Date: 3/19/2024 6:44:00 PM
Dear Kim, your words touch me deeply. Your interpretation of my poem captures the essence of its themes with such clarity and emotion. Your acknowledgment of the intertwined elements of fate, despair, and hope is deeply felt. Your appreciation of the paradoxical nature of faith amidst turmoil adds depth to the conversation. Thank you for your heartfelt response and for embracing the vulnerability inherent in sharing one's art. Blessings, my dear friend,- Daniel
Date: 3/19/2024 1:19:00 PM
Amazing analogy of life's unexpected twists of turns by showing one of your own life's most eventful ones. I've had a few of these myself, but none quite as dramatic as yours. Mine was silently injuring me at the hands of a doctor who was having me take poison (though his kind will not admit this is what it is). Then you live your life with this kind of thing, trying not to let it rule the way you think. Does the herniated disc still plague you? Incredible story, and symbolism used
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Date: 3/19/2024 6:41:00 PM
Dear Andrea, thank you for your thoughtful reflection on my poem. Your words are deeply felt, highlighting life's intricate and unexpected twists. It's comforting to know others have navigated similar tumultuous paths, even if their manifestations differ. The metaphor of silent injury is the resilience required to endure unseen struggles. While the herniated disc still lingers, its grip has loosened, a testament to the healing power of time and perseverance. Andrea, your anmazing insights illuminate the shared human experience, knitting empathy into the fabric of our connection. Thank you my dear friend, Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/19/2024 11:04:00 AM
Thats terrifying and definitely would leave one scarred for life in so many aspects, i have been through some horrifying accidents but not one on a motorbike, and that left me anxious especially when i sit in the backseat, as a passenger. Youv written very well your poem expressed with such vivid details, i loved especially “For every twist, each turn, each scar, I learned that strength lies… not in steel or car,” which depicts your inner strength, and faith. What a profound and moving write this is, and i love your arrangement of lines and also how youve phrased so many lines, and how during times like that you find yourself thinking and being grateful to the highest above, for saving you, yes in times like that we usually do think of God. I have so much to say about this poem, as its not just very sincere but also impeccable how youve expressed. Pleasure reading this. A fave it is
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Date: 3/19/2024 11:25:00 AM
Dearest Empress, your heartfelt response to my poem and your understanding of the intricate emotions interspersed in each line touched me deeply. It's comforting to know that my words were well validated by someone who's been through their own challenges. Your appreciation for the details and arrangement means the world to me. Thank you for sharing your reflections; they've ignited a profound connection and reaffirmed the power of art to transcend barriers and touch souls. Dear Empress, it is always delightful and uplifting to read your amazing comments. - Blessings, Daniel
Date: 3/19/2024 10:56:00 AM
I never rode a motorcycle, I was too scared. It is fun to take a short ride on it, though. Hopefully no one runs into an accident trashing someone's joyful ride. I am glad you survived your accident and still enjoy your rides.
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Date: 3/19/2024 11:08:00 AM
Hello Jay, Thanks for stopping by, and it was probably to your advantage not to have ridden. I really enjoyed riding, and there is something about it that brings a sense of freedom. - Blessings, My Friend!
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