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Magnolia Moments

When I whirl as wind, unwavering ~ surfing on watercolor wings of simmering seasons, which flicker and fly through me, filtering my faults with a wrinkled fantasy, I waltz whistling ~ in their whispering waves, where the lachrymal leaf of loneliness lulls me to a lavender sanctuary of sanguine sentiments, beneath the drizzling doom of sleepless stars. If there were a trinket tarnished with tulip-teals of tasteless truths, tiptoeing over twilight to traverse the ticking tickles of t i m e ~ I would be the sunset, chased by the suffocating silence of saffron storms. O' ruler of the reckless minds there's an empyrean inferno ignited around your devilish globe of diamonds ~ as there is always a synonym for mirrorless miracles which we feel in our bones, and the hierarchy of hateful hyacinths is meant to be melted ~ by the melodious mints of magnolia mantras. We are n o t h i n g, but moments dissolved in meditation, clenched on the turmeric thread of lustrous lemon love ~ slightly separated from the murkiness, by the narrowed neon Nile flowing in our intuitive isles. Luxury is lavishly luminous before it beckons our beliefs, bleeding in our versatile constellations of superconscious virtues. Perhaps, the skies too wonder if their sirens are blindly flawed with the fragrance of forgiveness, by the sailors of nirvana ~ for those who have never surrendered their sins before the sweven shimmers of our sublime soul-guardians. This hummingbird has her heartbeat hushed in the haze of heaven and I am deceased, a dawning dialect in the scentless sunrise of life ~ for, every patriot of p e a c e, pirouetting in the ethers of ephemeral elixirs, is born from burning auroras, cascading upon the aurelian lips of angels aching within fractured letters of apocalyptic affection. "I'm h u m a n, a honeyed heart-lily of light ~ carved within nylon notes of the crestfallen nightingale, clenched to the fist of fate as it has always concealed the stardust of my secluded solace. Akin to the seven petals of prana, my spirit shall b l o s s o m breath by breath, seeping in the sepal shades of a crystal canopy ~ where enlightened I am, e v a p o r a t i n g through their veins in the essence of spiritual awakening... "

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Date: 2/14/2025 2:48:00 PM
Hiya, this is a remarkable and complex poem. I love the ending about your spirit blossoming (in the fact of all that has been described before). Life is not simple, and yet we can make something really good when our hearts and minds work toward it. Hope you are well and wishing you much success in life and many smiles along the way!!
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Date: 2/10/2025 9:28:00 AM
Best alliterations ever! Belated congratulations on your POTD Hiya! Missed this one and YOU sweet poetess. ~Anaya
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Date: 2/10/2025 6:28:00 AM
Dear Hiya, this is pure transcendence like poetry from the breath of the universe itself. I love how each line flickers with light and longing, a melody of meditation and fire. Your words don’t just speak; they become something sacred. Absolutely mesmerizing, Congrats on POTD. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Date: 2/9/2025 6:10:00 PM
' I'm a honeyed heart-lily of light ~ carved within nylon notes. ' Such a beautiful image. You are that lingering light, my sweet friend. Your heart is filled with so much love. Congratulations Hiya, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 2/9/2025 5:34:00 PM
Yay! Congrats Hiya! It's well deserved. <3
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Date: 2/9/2025 10:59:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful poem.o.t.d., Hiva :) - hugs
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Date: 2/9/2025 10:05:00 AM
Congratulations Hiva on your well deserved POTD. xx
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Date: 2/9/2025 9:07:00 AM
I am back with delighted congratulations on POTD. A wonderful work, dear Hiya. :)
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Date: 2/9/2025 8:09:00 AM
Nice alliterations. Congrats on your POTD! Thanks for sharing.
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Date: 2/9/2025 7:32:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. I enjoyed the metaphors and the contrasts of the material world vs. spiritual world. The riveting words "O' ruler of the reckless minds there's an empyrean inferno ignited around your devilish globe of diamonds" had a powerful statement in the poem.
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Date: 2/9/2025 7:14:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. It's quite a cacophony of creative thoughts, imagery and imagination. Well done, Terrell
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Date: 2/9/2025 7:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. What a wonderful write. Have a great day with your win..............................
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Date: 2/9/2025 5:53:00 AM
Who knew magnolias had mantras? Pretty poem hiya. Enjoy your day in the spotlight
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Date: 2/9/2025 5:03:00 AM
Wonderful write Hiya, Congrats on POTD
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Date: 2/9/2025 4:46:00 AM
A thoughtful alliterative write, both smart and beautiful! Congrats on POTD, Hiya! A fave
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Date: 2/9/2025 3:34:00 AM
Hiya, beautifully penned, congratulations on POTD.
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Date: 2/9/2025 3:27:00 AM
Coming back to congratulate you. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/9/2025 3:07:00 AM
Beautiful magnolia moments Hiya, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
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Date: 2/9/2025 2:54:00 AM
Back to congratulate you on receiving POTD! Well deserved dear hiya! Im happy to see you featured
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Date: 2/9/2025 1:37:00 AM
Amazing write as always my dear poet friend Hiya! Always a great pleasure reading your outstanding work and I enjoyed it immensely. Congtratulations on a well-deserved POTD! Thanks for sharing your superb talent in poetry. If this is for the contest, a great winning piece too. God bless you always and your poetry. Best wishes always. Hugs
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Date: 2/9/2025 1:05:00 AM
A beautiful maze of alliteration and imagery! Congratulations on potd!
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Date: 2/9/2025 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
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Date: 2/9/2025 12:57:00 AM
Back with congratulations to you Hiya on today's POTD honour, enjoy your day. Tom
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Date: 2/8/2025 8:27:00 PM
Phew....! I had posted a long comment on your wonderful poem yesterday. I find that it hasn't reached you.... may be due to some technical glitch! I feel so disappointed. I have lost the joy of having read your beautiful poem which made me stay spell bound. What wonderful metaphors and glossy alliterations! While Ink is an empress, you are no less than a queen! "a trinket tarnished with tulip-teals of tasteless truths, tiptoeing over twilight to traverse the ticking tickles of t i m e" Who can write such a string of alliterations! "meant to be melted ~ by the melodious mints of magnolia mantras. We are n o t h i n g, but moments dissolved in meditation," .... another amazing sequence. With the range of emotions paraded in an awesome way, this poem surpasses your age and experience. Kudos, dear gifted poetess!
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Date: 2/8/2025 6:08:00 PM
Hmmm ~ “seven petals of prana” ~ a knower. A sublime write, Hiya, replete with alliteration and metaphors, penned in your inimitable style, warmest congratulations on your top win
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Date: 2/9/2025 3:14:00 AM
Back again with warmest congratulations on POTD
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