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Magic In Those Eyes

,,,,,,,<.> <.>,,,,,, his and her eyes touch hushed like misty fingertips ``` first sight hiding chills but alchemy brews fireworks popping nerves’ ablaze``` skins speak thirsty truth twin spirits unleashed with each breath, embers draw tight``` faces drink steamed love all rights reserved © ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, (( for Michael Falotico's " Eyes First Meet" )) by nette onclaud

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James Fraser

Date: 4/4/2011 10:47:00 AM

Perfect delightful poetry Nette, most deserved of it's top win in Michael's contest - way to go girl....:)x

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/4/2011 5:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Nette in the contest "Eyes First Meet" sponsored by Michael Falotico. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 4/3/2011 7:22:00 PM

wonderful entry Nette, congrats on your win in the contest

Andrew Crisci

Date: 4/3/2011 11:16:00 AM

Heartfelt congratulation on your first win, Nette. It's a poem written with intense feelings of passion and desire. Thanks for your kind comments. Have a blessed day and keep on writing amazing poetry! Peace and Love, Andrew.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 1:56:00 PM

wow, you are on fire with this poem AND your super duper win, Nette. Congratulations!

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 11:58:00 AM

Absolutely stunning Nette, congratulations on your first place win in the contest ;)

Kash Poet

Date: 4/2/2011 6:17:00 AM

A magic poem from you nette!Congrats on your 1st place win!---kashinath

Elaine George

Date: 4/2/2011 1:40:00 AM

Wow! I am blown away with the brillance of this string Senryu, Nette. Many congrats on your BIG WIN. Lainie

Deb Wilson

Date: 4/2/2011 1:21:00 AM

It's an honor to share 1st place with you for this awesomely beautiful and "steamy" piece! Congratulations Nette! love,Deb

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/2/2011 1:01:00 AM

Love the imagery Nette, such words of love, and those wonderful misty fingertips. congrats, brilliant number one. Harry

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/1/2011 11:50:00 PM

well lemme go borrow your whoots, now Nette ;) I just knew Michael would like this one, and I was so right! Super yay for your first place win with Deb :) hugs :)

Sidney Beck

Date: 4/1/2011 11:33:00 PM

wow "steamed love" "Misty fingertips" "eyes touch" another marvellous win with magic wordchoice...typically skilled and professional....(I fall to my knees in ululating admiration)....L O L - seriously, well done again Nette ( dont forget my payment for the poem please).....Syd

Gautami Phookan

Date: 4/1/2011 10:13:00 PM

Congratulations for your super win nette. Beautiful work,simply stunning..Gautami

Tahera Mannan

Date: 4/1/2011 9:36:00 PM

Many many heartiest congrats for this super win dear nette.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 4/1/2011 5:35:00 PM

Intense and emotional. Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/1/2011 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Nicole Hawkins

Date: 4/1/2011 3:31:00 PM

Awesome work Nette! Congratulations on winning first place, you deserve it :) -Nicole

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/1/2011 3:08:00 PM

Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Michael, nette

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2011 2:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your deserving Ist Place Win in Michael's Contest, Nette! Beautiful! Always, Annalise

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/1/2011 2:31:00 PM

So happy to see your poem taking first place, Nette! Congratulations, dear. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 2:15:00 PM

Way to go Nette my friend.. congrats on your first place win in Michael's contest with this exciting entry .. so cool... enjoy your top spot with luv..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 2:12:00 PM

Congrats on your 1st place in my contest...luv Michael

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 11:05:00 AM

Intense passion here nette!Enjoyed---kashinath

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 3/29/2011 10:16:00 AM

a toast to these two steamy eyed lovers nette :) betcha Michael would love this one! hugs :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 3/29/2011 6:02:00 AM

Certainly some alchemy a'brewing here Nette enjoyed this piece today, and many thanks for your fine congratulations on my featured poem!