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LUNE LANDING - series of lune haiku

LATE BLOOMER sun highlights the bod of oak bark - Autumn knight CLINGERS won’t let go - cling to puppy love, its branches CLEAVERS cleaves to old relationship vow - storm shakes loose LANDING the leaves land amidst the old maids’ bitterness BRITTLE BONES the children jump in old gals’ laps living loud RING AROUND THE ROSIES circle round sing, “ashes…ashes…” and fall down LEARNING CURVE life up there in the lusty air now seems strange GONE WITH THE WIND scattering the old bats’ ashes to the wind REBORN phoenix lands a bitty wiser and lighter

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Date: 11/23/2023 5:47:00 AM
Hi Kim….just saw this….always forget about POTW…..Congratulations my friend….big week for you both POTD and POTW…..well deserved!! You go girl….Debx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/24/2023 6:17:00 AM
I was so surprised! Thank you so much!
Date: 11/14/2023 3:07:00 PM
Exceptional Hiku's, Kim. My coconut-weaved hat tips favorly for you on this POTW rarity exposé, Cheers. Aloha, William
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 7:10:00 PM
Thank you so much, William! <3
Date: 11/14/2023 12:55:00 PM
I like the last one, although I really don't understand the concept...'old women' 'Moon landing' this reminds me of Footles! Congratulations on POTW Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/14/2023 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Anaya!
Date: 11/13/2023 6:11:00 PM
Interesting thoughts within. Such a clever way to string so many haiku's together. I like this thought: "children jump in old gals’ laps living loud." Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Week. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 7:01:00 PM
Glad you liked that one! :)
Date: 11/13/2023 3:06:00 PM
My congratulations are tardy but nonetheless sincere, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:23:00 PM
Never tardy! I didn’t realize we had poem of the week. So many ways to read. Thanks, Lin, bunches xx
Date: 11/12/2023 9:26:00 AM
Don't know how I missed this one Kim Each is terrific. Together, fantastic. Congratulations on POTW! :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Linda! Glad you enjoyed!
Date: 11/12/2023 9:05:00 AM
Love this Kim ! Each one on its own is powerful…as a group it magnifies ! congratulations on POTW .Hugs, Susan :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:18:00 PM
I appreciate your assessment! Hugs ~ Kim
Date: 11/12/2023 7:18:00 AM
Excellent string of Haikus, Kim. Congratulations on your POTW honor. Enjoy your special week of recognition! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:17:00 PM
Thank you, Bill…hailing from Georgia USA. Blessings!
Date: 11/12/2023 6:19:00 AM
Back with Congratulations on your POTW win. I enjoyed reading them again. Enjoy your wonderful win/day.................
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:16:00 PM
I appreciate that, Paula!
Date: 11/12/2023 5:48:00 AM
Kim, a creative set, congratulations on POTW.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:15:00 PM
Thank you, Tania! They are fun to write!
Date: 11/12/2023 5:48:00 AM
BIG congrats on POTW, Kim. Fabulous haiku poems, my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:15:00 PM
I so appreciate you, dear friend!
Date: 11/12/2023 5:23:00 AM
Lovely set of haikus Kim! Congrats on potw!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, Karen!
Date: 11/12/2023 3:47:00 AM
Back with congratulations to Kim on the honour of POTW. Enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/13/2023 4:14:00 PM
Thank you, dear Tom!
Date: 11/9/2023 2:17:00 AM
Great litany of haikus. Loved them. Blessings.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:12:00 AM
Thank you so much xx
Date: 11/8/2023 6:35:00 PM
Kudos, Kim! This looked complicated to write. Very enjoyable!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:10:00 AM
Thank you, Paige!
Date: 11/8/2023 7:22:00 AM
Hello Kim,beautiful Lune Haikus!! Have a blessed day!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/9/2023 5:09:00 AM
Thank you, Theophilos!
Date: 11/8/2023 1:06:00 AM
Awesome lune haiku's, Kim. Love the "Gone with the wind" Hugs Charlie
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/8/2023 5:03:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie! :)
Date: 11/7/2023 3:48:00 PM
Wow, Kim, you've mastered these Lune Haikus so well. Very creative and imaginative. Bravo!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 8:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gina! :)
Date: 11/7/2023 3:07:00 PM
Kim, your haiku is a superb and imaginative compilation that exhibits a captivating allure, becoming increasingly captivating once engaged.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 3:19:00 PM
Thank you so much! I appreciate you, my friend!
Date: 11/7/2023 1:29:00 PM
Very interesting set. The two middle ones were my very favorites! Landing and Brittle Bones
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! Glad you enjoyed those!
Date: 11/7/2023 11:56:00 AM
Creative/fun Haiku writesssssss. I enjoyed reading them. Have a wonderful day.........
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 2:51:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 2:42:00 PM
Thank you, Paula!
Date: 11/7/2023 8:32:00 AM
Great string of haiku Kim, they're very addictive once you start. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 10:01:00 AM
Yea, they are :) Thank you, Tom!
Date: 11/7/2023 8:29:00 AM
Loved your creative choice to display your lovely Haikus, Kim. I had to add this one to my FAVs list! Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/7/2023 10:01:00 AM
Thank you so much, Bill! <3

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