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Luna Lust

Your cool as frost stare, while coyly playing peek-a-boo from behind a fan of clouds, has kept your wanton visage burned upon mans imagination. You have mystified for eons, with a slowly batting eye. Drawing upon our souls, as a tree draws moisture. Slowly, yet surely siphoning our lust. Men have stepped a kiss upon your delicately powdered face. You have left them craving more. Luna- the goddess of moon contest Placement: 9th place

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Date: 10/26/2010 9:02:00 PM
as a tree draws moisture, that is a gret simile.
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Date: 7/15/2010 9:38:00 AM
Congrats on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram’s contest., you are such a great talent. Please keep your poetry pen dancing to the drum beat of your passion.. Be great and enjoy the honor. Love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/13/2010 10:27:00 AM
Wow, Paula! This is really brilliant writing...you have captured the subject perfectly and I agree with Dane Ann's comment about the last three lines along with 'from beyond a fan of clouds'...congratulations also on your win! - Tim
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations Paula, on placing in the “Luna - the goddess of moon” contest with this shining poem. My favorite line is, "Men have stepped a kiss upon your delicately powdered face." It just captures my imagination. Enjoy your glory! Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:47:00 PM
she likes to tuant amd tease but surely gives the eyes some ease congrats :D
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Date: 7/12/2010 4:41:00 PM
Very nice, Paula, and congrats on your win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/12/2010 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations Paula on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Luna-the goddess of moon". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:02:00 AM
Congratulations, Paula in this contest with your worthy poem. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/12/2010 9:01:00 AM
Ah, this is great, Paula. Especially like that peek-a-boo image; we see it so often. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:53:00 AM
Congrats Paula on your winning poem in the Luna contest with this terrific write on the theme ..enjoy a victory dance at the winners circle .. with luv..
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Date: 7/12/2010 8:26:00 AM
Congratulatins on your well deserved win, with this lovely Personification, dear Paula. Love, Lainie
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Date: 7/12/2010 6:03:00 AM
congrats Paula on your win. I loved this contest..such beautiful poems..BG
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Date: 7/12/2010 5:55:00 AM
Congrats on the 9th place win in my contest, Paula
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Date: 7/10/2010 12:02:00 PM
Great personification, really enjoyed this!
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