Lucky Dip

Lucky Dip (cut-out poem) _____________________ fish for a bargain affordable at a discount where the majority of shoppers with their cuddly puppies watch time go by savouring fresh quality fruit & veg followed by stuffed pork rolls and mousse dessert with dark exquisite sweetness for demanding palates where quality costs less sweet luxury surprises for lovers of strong delicate flavours. ----------------------------------- Author: Paul Callus ~ 16th March 2014 Contest: Cut-up Poems/Word Collage Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot Placing: 7th

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Julia Ward

Date: 3/28/2015 7:06:00 AM

Did you write any more cut-up poems after this? It's very good! Hugs, Julia, xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/28/2015 2:25:00 PM

I meant to, but so far have not written any. I'll wait till I get some more junk mail:) Hugs // paul

Robin Davis

Date: 5/11/2014 10:51:00 PM

Paul This is an interesting and "yummy" write. But I would share the goodies with the puppies. LOL Thank you for the great comment on my My Past poem.

Paul Callus
Date: 5/12/2014 5:31:00 PM

Thank you Robin; this happens to be my first attempt at cut-up poems; a very interesting form....and , yes, most "yummy". [glad you liked my comments; I would not post anything unless it was what I truly believe:)] // paul

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/31/2014 10:23:00 PM

PAUL, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA

Paul Callus
Date: 4/1/2014 2:12:00 AM

Linda, thanks...you are too kind :) /x/ paul

Aiyah Torres

Date: 3/28/2014 10:45:00 AM

what a fine delicacies...you only not filled our stomach.. you filled our mind !! ... this is so great, Paul!! Congrats on your win!! :')

Paul Callus
Date: 3/28/2014 10:49:00 AM

Thank you Aiyah; I don't mind sharing :) glad you liked it. /x/ paul

Roger Horsch

Date: 3/27/2014 8:09:00 AM

Hello Paul, Your poem is making me hungry. It is a well written poem my friend. Congrats on your win.......Roger

Paul Callus
Date: 3/27/2014 8:16:00 AM

Thank you Roger. Sorry I can't serve you some real food :) cu // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2014 3:11:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Paul ! - I read it with pleasure again - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 3/27/2014 8:02:00 AM

The pleasure is mine...to have you revisiting, Anne Lise :) txs glad you like it. /x/ paul

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/26/2014 6:26:00 AM

Very creative to pen a collage poem and congrats on the win, paul

Paul Callus
Date: 3/26/2014 6:40:00 AM

Thank you Dr. for your encouraging comments. cu // paul

Donna Jones

Date: 3/25/2014 10:29:00 PM

This was fun.....Congratulations Paul...

Paul Callus
Date: 3/26/2014 5:35:00 AM

Hi Donna; yes this was fun; got me hooked, too:) thanks for stopping by. // paul

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 3/25/2014 10:23:00 PM

Well done Paul and Congrats on win. Verlena

Paul Callus
Date: 3/26/2014 5:33:00 AM

Thank you Verlena. cu around. // paul

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 3/25/2014 7:51:00 PM

I'm guessing you chopped the words from a cookery book or something, but those cuddly puppies threw me a bit! nevertheless, it's probably the most straightforward one I've read! congrats on your win in my contest :)

Paul Callus
Date: 3/26/2014 5:32:00 AM

Hi Charlotte! This was my 1st attempt at cut-up poems. The chopped words/phrases came from junk mail that I receive daily in huge amounts...that's why food etc got mixed with puppies:) Thank you for giving me the chance to experiment; looking forward to your next contest! // paul

Theresa Stephens

Date: 3/25/2014 5:07:00 PM

Hi Paul, Congrats on your placement. It flows along with style and imagination. Regards Theresa xx

Paul Callus
Date: 3/25/2014 5:23:00 PM

Thank you Theresa for your kind comment; really appreciated :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/22/2014 2:52:00 PM

:D hahahah... nice.. nice nice... !!!!! === olive_eloi with a hungry stomach. :P

Paul Callus
Date: 3/22/2014 4:03:00 PM

Not a very appropriate poem for this time of the year when many people fast or at least try to make small sacrifices...and there I go tempting you !! :) thank you again for visiting. :) // paul

Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/22/2014 9:06:00 AM

Paul No gourmet myself, I'll show this to a few gourmands I know and I'll just enjoy your lovely lines. Kathy

Paul Callus
Date: 3/22/2014 10:39:00 AM

Hi Kathryn, welcome to my posts. Thank you for your witty remarks and for visiting. Hope to see you around more often :) // paul

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/19/2014 3:34:00 PM

Lovers of strong delicate flavours... :) This is a tasty poem, Paul. I'm boggled at how writing this form even works! You've pulled it off well!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/19/2014 3:42:00 PM

Don't ask me how! I just had a go at it...out of curiosity and what you see is the result of recycled unwanted mail :) I will have another go though, because there's more in it than I thought. cu // paul

Chris Bedave

Date: 3/18/2014 7:34:00 PM

its cool....you can write!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/19/2014 5:51:00 AM

Hi Chris, we meet again. Thank you for your lovely comment; to be honest this is my first attempt at writing a cut-out poem. Seems it's not too bad :) // paul

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/18/2014 12:37:00 AM

Nice composition. I'm not hungry right now.

Paul Callus
Date: 3/18/2014 1:47:00 AM

Good morning Robert; thanks for visiting. We say over here that the eyes feast first and the stomach afterwards :) // paul

Teresa Godwin

Date: 3/16/2014 6:38:00 PM

That is absolutely COOL! Love it. I can sense that i have soo much to learn. Thanks, Teresa

Paul Callus
Date: 3/17/2014 7:53:00 AM

Can't help thanking you again today Teresa for your most welcome visits and lovely comments. cu around // paul

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/16/2014 5:41:00 PM

perfect sentences me thinks!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/17/2014 7:51:00 AM

Thank you Andrea; I'm still finding my feet where cut-out poems are concerned. /x/ paul

Joan Warburton

Date: 3/16/2014 1:38:00 PM

LOVE THIS..

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2014 2:40:00 PM

Thank you Joan, for visiting and commenting. Glad you like it. // paul

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/16/2014 1:00:00 PM

i like this poem and the way you've arranged it - it works very well!

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2014 2:35:00 PM

Thank you Ilene. This is the first time that I've written one of these. I'm waiting for feedback to see where I stand! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/16/2014 9:53:00 AM

- I saw a program on television yesterday - a lady who found her own meals in the trash - really amazing and quite great food - she made feasts to her friends of this food - a shame how much food we threw in the trash. - Thank you for your visit on my last poem, really appreciate your visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus
Date: 3/16/2014 10:47:00 AM

Hi Anne Lise. How did you hit so near to what I had in mind!? That's why I called it "Lucky Dip". Thanks for stopping by and commenting. :) /x/ paul