Paul Callus Poet Free verse

Lucky Dip

Lucky Dip  (cut-out poem)
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fish
for a
bargain
affordable 
at a discount
where the majority
of shoppers
with
their 
cuddly puppies
watch time 
go
by
savouring
fresh
quality
fruit & veg
followed
by 
stuffed pork rolls
and
mousse dessert
with
dark
exquisite sweetness
for
demanding palates
where
quality costs less
sweet luxury
surprises
for
lovers 
of
strong
delicate 
flavours.


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Author: Paul Callus ~ 16th March 2014
Contest: Cut-up Poems/Word Collage
Sponsor: Charlotte Puddifoot
Placing: 7th

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Julia Ward March 28, 2015 at 7:06 AM Did you write any more cut-up poems after this? It's very good! Hugs, Julia, xx Paul Callus March 28, 2015 at 2:25 PM I meant to, but so far have not written any. I'll wait till I get some more junk mail:) Hugs // paul

Robin Davis May 11, 2014 at 10:51 PM Paul This is an interesting and "yummy" write. But I would share the goodies with the puppies. LOL Thank you for the great comment on my My Past poem. Paul Callus May 12, 2014 at 5:31 PM Thank you Robin; this happens to be my first attempt at cut-up poems; a very interesting form....and , yes, most "yummy". [glad you liked my comments; I would not post anything unless it was what I truly believe:)] // paul

Poet Destroyer A March 31, 2014 at 10:23 PM PAUL, Congratulations :) awesome winning poem..... XOX ~LINDA Paul Callus April 1, 2014 at 2:12 AM Linda, thanks...you are too kind :) /x/ paul

Aiyah Torres March 28, 2014 at 10:45 AM what a fine delicacies...you only not filled our stomach.. you filled our mind !! ... this is so great, Paul!! Congrats on your win!! :') Paul Callus March 28, 2014 at 10:49 AM Thank you Aiyah; I don't mind sharing :) glad you liked it. /x/ paul

Roger Horsch March 27, 2014 at 8:09 AM Hello Paul, Your poem is making me hungry. It is a well written poem my friend. Congrats on your win.......Roger Paul Callus March 27, 2014 at 8:16 AM Thank you Roger. Sorry I can't serve you some real food :) cu // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2014 at 3:11 AM - Congratulations on your winning poem, Paul ! - I read it with pleasure again - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus March 27, 2014 at 8:02 AM The pleasure is mine...to have you revisiting, Anne Lise :) txs glad you like it. /x/ paul

Dr.Ram Mehta March 26, 2014 at 6:26 AM Very creative to pen a collage poem and congrats on the win, paul Paul Callus March 26, 2014 at 6:40 AM Thank you Dr. for your encouraging comments. cu // paul

Donna Jones March 25, 2014 at 10:29 PM This was fun.....Congratulations Paul... Paul Callus March 26, 2014 at 5:35 AM Hi Donna; yes this was fun; got me hooked, too:) thanks for stopping by. // paul

Verlena S. Walker March 25, 2014 at 10:23 PM Well done Paul and Congrats on win. Verlena Paul Callus March 26, 2014 at 5:33 AM Thank you Verlena. cu around. // paul

Charlotte Puddifoot March 25, 2014 at 7:51 PM I'm guessing you chopped the words from a cookery book or something, but those cuddly puppies threw me a bit! nevertheless, it's probably the most straightforward one I've read! congrats on your win in my contest :) Paul Callus March 26, 2014 at 5:32 AM Hi Charlotte! This was my 1st attempt at cut-up poems. The chopped words/phrases came from junk mail that I receive daily in huge amounts...that's why food etc got mixed with puppies:) Thank you for giving me the chance to experiment; looking forward to your next contest! // paul

Theresa Stephens March 25, 2014 at 5:07 PM Hi Paul, Congrats on your placement. It flows along with style and imagination. Regards Theresa xx Paul Callus March 25, 2014 at 5:23 PM Thank you Theresa for your kind comment; really appreciated :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 22, 2014 at 2:52 PM :D hahahah... nice.. nice nice... !!!!! === olive_eloi with a hungry stomach. :P Paul Callus March 22, 2014 at 4:03 PM Not a very appropriate poem for this time of the year when many people fast or at least try to make small sacrifices...and there I go tempting you !! :) thank you again for visiting. :) // paul

Kathryn Collins March 22, 2014 at 9:06 AM Paul No gourmet myself, I'll show this to a few gourmands I know and I'll just enjoy your lovely lines. Kathy Paul Callus March 22, 2014 at 10:39 AM Hi Kathryn, welcome to my posts. Thank you for your witty remarks and for visiting. Hope to see you around more often :) // paul

Eileen Manassian March 19, 2014 at 3:34 PM Lovers of strong delicate flavours... :) This is a tasty poem, Paul. I'm boggled at how writing this form even works! You've pulled it off well! Paul Callus March 19, 2014 at 3:42 PM Don't ask me how! I just had a go at it...out of curiosity and what you see is the result of recycled unwanted mail :) I will have another go though, because there's more in it than I thought. cu // paul

Chris Bedave March 18, 2014 at 7:34 PM its cool....you can write! Paul Callus March 19, 2014 at 5:51 AM Hi Chris, we meet again. Thank you for your lovely comment; to be honest this is my first attempt at writing a cut-out poem. Seems it's not too bad :) // paul

Robert Pettit March 18, 2014 at 12:37 AM Nice composition. I'm not hungry right now. Paul Callus March 18, 2014 at 1:47 AM Good morning Robert; thanks for visiting. We say over here that the eyes feast first and the stomach afterwards :) // paul

Teresa Godwin March 16, 2014 at 6:38 PM That is absolutely COOL! Love it. I can sense that i have soo much to learn. Thanks, Teresa Paul Callus March 17, 2014 at 7:53 AM Can't help thanking you again today Teresa for your most welcome visits and lovely comments. cu around // paul

Andrea Dietrich March 16, 2014 at 5:41 PM perfect sentences me thinks! Paul Callus March 17, 2014 at 7:51 AM Thank you Andrea; I'm still finding my feet where cut-out poems are concerned. /x/ paul

Joan Warburton March 16, 2014 at 1:38 PM LOVE THIS.. Paul Callus March 16, 2014 at 2:40 PM Thank you Joan, for visiting and commenting. Glad you like it. // paul

Ilene Bauer March 16, 2014 at 1:00 PM i like this poem and the way you've arranged it - it works very well! Paul Callus March 16, 2014 at 2:35 PM Thank you Ilene. This is the first time that I've written one of these. I'm waiting for feedback to see where I stand! // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen March 16, 2014 at 9:53 AM - I saw a program on television yesterday - a lady who found her own meals in the trash - really amazing and quite great food - she made feasts to her friends of this food - a shame how much food we threw in the trash. - Thank you for your visit on my last poem, really appreciate your visit. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Paul Callus March 16, 2014 at 10:47 AM Hi Anne Lise. How did you hit so near to what I had in mind!? That's why I called it "Lucky Dip". Thanks for stopping by and commenting. :) /x/ paul