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Love's Promise

The faint whisper of love's promise echoes within her hollowed heart. And she suppresses silent screams, for forever has reached its end. She sifts the wind to separate the faint whisper of love's promise. But the wind won't speak of such things, and a tear trickles down her cheek. Her heart was stripped of innocence when he abruptly left one day. The faint whisper of love's promise fell silent as he walked away. Although he's gone, she still listens, knowing all she'll hear is the wind. But in her dreams, she can still hear the faint whisper of love's promise.

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Date: 9/26/2019 4:34:00 PM
Emile congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem and I love your image too!
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:03:00 AM
Thanks Constance, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2019 12:49:00 PM
Lovely poem congrats on your win!;)
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:02:00 AM
Thanks Brenda, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2019 8:27:00 AM
- A touching poem, Emile - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/26/2019 8:04:00 AM
A beautifully, sad poem, Emile, and a very nicely constructed Quatern. Congrats on your win. John
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Date: 9/27/2019 8:00:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 9/15/2019 8:31:00 PM
Really nicely done Emile, I like the repeating refrain, is this like a Villanelle?
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Date: 9/16/2019 9:36:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your support my friend, this form is called a "Quatern", Emile.
Date: 9/15/2019 3:08:00 PM
Even the wind mocks the breaking heart! Nicely done my friend.
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Date: 9/16/2019 9:36:00 AM
hanks David, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

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