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Loved and Lost

When I open your book of life,
what do I see.
A daddy and a man,
sent from God just to me.
Your life before me was not all play,
you worked hard for life~family and country.
You were there to help with homework,
then came your own style of dance lessons.
Shopping was a real treat,
you would let me pick out what I really wanted.
You were the one who helped me with my pets,
even going to the vets.
Naturally my skates came from you,
a huge surprise that lit up the room.
You taught me many things,
like a quitter never wins.
As you got older so did I,
my school alarm clock was you awaking me with hot coffee bedside.
I remember when you handed me the car keys,
you also handed me a coin.
You said,
put this in your shoe so you can call in an emergency.
I can still see you clowning around at our wedding,
making me laugh on my very special day.
It was hard to say good bye,
when I was moving far away.
Weekly phone calls did help,
our talks would give us both some pep.
One day a call came in,
your dad has been hurt.
A plane I needed to catch,
to get there before you were gone.
Dad saying goodbye was very hard,
how does one say this to their very own hero.
I will not say goodbye,
until we meet in heaven dad~my hero~my best friend.
Date Written: 1/22/2023

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Date: 1/25/2023 2:40:00 PM
Ahhh!! Loss of our parent/s is so very hard, but knowing that we will see each other again is wonderful. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page with congratulations. Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/27/2023 9:14:00 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you like this write. Yes, we will see them again. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 1/24/2023 11:10:00 AM
Pula! This is so great. I feel I know your Dad! You painted a glorious picture of him.i, too, have written of my Dad, They do die, unfortunately, as shall we, . We miss them on earth, don’t see? Love.this heartfelt poem Pangie xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/25/2023 12:35:00 PM
Thank You for your note and for your kind words. Glad you like this write about my dad. Yes, we do miss them. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 1/24/2023 7:09:00 AM
You've many beautiful memories with your dad my dear friend Paula. He was a great and ideal dad for sure. You wrote an excellent and sweet tribute for him. I was moved while reading it. It reminds me of my dad too, who also went ahead to the Lord. Sending you all my love and best wishes my dear friend. Thanks for sharing. Take care always and God bless. Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2023 7:25:00 AM
Thank You for your note, love and best wishes. Glad you enjoyed my dad write. This was many years ago but I still miss him so much. This was very hard for me to write. We will see them again one day in heaven. Have a great/blessed day with hugs.................
Date: 1/23/2023 8:49:00 PM
Your poem honors your dad so beautifully Paula, he sounds like a wonderful man. I couldn't say goodbye to my dad either, it was "See you later." And we will Paula, <3 Hugs to you. My heart hurts as I read your poem, I so relate.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2023 7:20:00 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you like my dad write. After all these years I still miss him so much. He was my hero and best friend. So sorry I made your heart hurt. It was very hard to write. Yes, we will see them again one day in heaven. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 1/23/2023 6:46:00 PM
A lovely poem in remembrance of your dear Dad, Paula packed with emotions ! Before the memories of our dear parents, our hearts falter with the sense of loss and our eyes well with tears.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2023 7:14:00 AM
Thank You for your note. Glad you like this write about my dad. So many memories, I only picked a few. It was very hard to write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 1/22/2023 6:06:00 PM
A beautiful and emotional piece, Paula, tributed with memories of him, your father, hero, best friend. Best of luck! Hugs
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2023 7:11:00 AM
Thank You for your note and for your best of luck. Glad you like this write. Many memories found it hard to write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 1/22/2023 5:04:00 PM
Paula, This poem tribute to your Dad is so moving and beautiful. I love the details you share about him… loving and wonderful. Best in the contest ! Blessings, Susan :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2023 7:09:00 AM
Thank You for your note and for your best. Glad you love my write. It was hard to write. Have a great/blessed day.................
Date: 1/22/2023 4:20:00 PM
You have excelled, Paula, in capturing the enchanted essence of the theme of loved and loss. Best wishes for the contest
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/24/2023 7:07:00 AM
Thank You for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like my "Loved and Lost" write. Have a great/blessed day.................

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