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Love You Outside of Thoughts

if i weren't afraid i'd shift these thoughts that fall before the yawn of morning skies i'd kiss you with the passion of its rise until you blushed with the same sanguine tones atop your pale skin breathe deep its gossamer breath as it falls in winded mists in the confines of darkness where we temporarily exist i'd arch myself within your arms beneath the soft illumination of moon where only shadows touch through thoughts i'd fall within the rhythm of your heart's song the melody of mine strumming along in perfect harmony if only to love you outside of thoughts September 10, 2019 If I weren't afraid poetry contest Sponsored by Line Gauthier

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Date: 10/1/2019 12:12:00 PM
Oh!! How perfect are these words! Wow Sandra, Congratulations on this win xx
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 6:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Francesca :)
Date: 9/23/2019 10:56:00 PM
this is a magical piece of writing...poetic and full of wonderful imagery. Congrats on your top placement.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 10/1/2019 6:29:00 PM
Thank you so much Jeanne...it was a fun write :)
Date: 9/21/2019 8:55:00 PM
Sandra, beautifully penned, congratulations on your win in the contest !
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/21/2019 9:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much :) hugs
Date: 9/21/2019 3:06:00 PM
beautiful sweet Sandy, I am so inspired by you…:)-luloo
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/21/2019 3:35:00 PM
awww thank you my friend, your poetry is always awe inspiring in itself...:) hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 9:45:00 PM
Such an amazing poem, Sandra:-) Congratulations on your deserving win!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 11:59:00 PM
Thank you Edward :) hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 8:29:00 PM
You are so romantic in this.... Moving poetry that should be read many times over. God bless you with Congratulations
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend :) hugs
Date: 9/20/2019 5:30:00 PM
wow, nobody delivers such beauty as you in these romantic lines here. Congrats. I love this one.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/20/2019 6:20:00 PM
Thank you Andrea, i wasn't aware it had a win attached to it :) hugs
Date: 9/11/2019 10:27:00 AM
And who says romantic writes are not your forte? This is up there with the best of them! If Chris Green appreciates it you know it's romantic, well done!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/11/2019 10:32:00 AM
wow Thank you John, i always respect your thoughts on my writes...romance doesn't fall often from my pen but it does on occasion :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 4:56:00 PM
Such a lovely romantic piece Sandy, nice wording and super imagery makes one listen to the message it conveys. You're really a old romantic at heart!!
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/11/2019 9:11:00 AM
lol thanks, must be the libra in me, my muse doesn't always follow the path of romance though :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 4:05:00 PM
Wonderful title! And the poem does not disappoint. ~ Gershon
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/11/2019 9:11:00 AM
Thank you my friend, see sometimes my muse comes out of the dark :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 2:16:00 PM
Another superb write, Sandy..I certainly enjoyed the read--there is a beautiful rhythm and flow.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/11/2019 9:10:00 AM
Thank you my friend, your comments always make me smile :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 1:18:00 PM
This reads poetically, as if a faerie has penned it.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/11/2019 9:09:00 AM
Thank you...perhaps i should talk to my muse and ask her where she got this from, she usually hides in darker thoughts :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 12:55:00 PM
For someone who says she doesn't write romantic poetry I have to wonder, who wrote this beautiful and enchanting love poem? :) Absolutely gorgeous, filled with deep affection and desire. Love that last line. A big win is in store with this I believe.
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/10/2019 1:01:00 PM
Thanks my friend your comment actually made me smile and giggle, as a Libra I have a romantic side but my muse seems to like to touch on the darker moments of life :) hugs
Date: 9/10/2019 12:06:00 PM
Oh wow came by to see what beautiful words you had to share and I was not disappointed! Amazing!;)
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Sandra Adams
Date: 9/10/2019 12:09:00 PM
Thank you, what a sweet thing to say... the contest wanted more upbeat then my usual darkness so this one took awhile to pen, and ended with 29 lines because of my normal shorter lines, i had to really work with it to end it at 20...i feel better about it after your kind comment :) hugs

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