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Love Trigger Woman

There is a bloom of October born of autumn's mauve harvest sweat, her roots reach into the reason of passion her skin smells of love's honest heat and her wings whip the crave alive in crimson wind, she is a sphinx of intellectual seduction and the lioness of Libra law, from the echo of her elan laughter summer's lean leaves which long for honey fire rustle with rebel hue, the rue of her rouge tears will woo you with memories of spring's sprite and winter's ruthless wrestle and in the desserts of her melodies your soul will succumb - J.A.B.

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Date: 11/20/2015 1:58:00 AM
She must have the most passionate touch to inspire such soulful creative words. You definitely used some exceptional words to describe her flame and yours.Awesome.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/21/2015 12:21:00 PM
She is undoubtedly, the rarest flower in existence Charma. Thank you for appreciating the spirit of my word choices, I've missed you my Lady Hawk...J.A.B.
Date: 11/10/2015 5:51:00 PM
Quite a journey for the awareness, Justin also a story from the soul of your reflection I gather, good to have spent time here today..'
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/12/2015 6:41:00 PM
My heart lives in the impossible, the love I give is incorruptible Joe. Stay strong Poet...J.A.B.
Date: 11/6/2015 11:03:00 AM
Wow, this is stunning! You seem to be a master of unique and creative imagery. I especially love the 6th line ending with "the lioness of Libra law." That sparks such a vivid image in my mind!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 11/6/2015 6:41:00 PM
My heart be mastered by love, passion in truth allows me to show you the visions of my soul Heather. Your mind is pretty, and very methodical, I like it...J.A.B.
Date: 10/20/2015 3:24:00 PM
The way use word's to describe things is amazing, ur a very talented person.... Incredible job my friend, I really enjoyed reading it.... :)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/20/2015 7:47:00 PM
Love describes the most passionate hearts sweet Dalia...J.A.B.
Date: 10/11/2015 6:26:00 PM
I dropped by to re-read eloquent deScriptive of yours....I love your unique form of expressing your thoughts........A.M.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/11/2015 7:20:00 PM
Unique beauty elicits unique Art...your pleasure with this poem motivates me Afolabi...J.A.B.
Date: 10/10/2015 1:01:00 PM
A beautiful poem, proud to read. SKAT
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/10/2015 8:00:00 PM
A beautiful poem for a beautiful woman...thanks Siddy...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 11:02:00 PM
This composition is in perfect bloom this season, Justin, falling in arrays of the most passionate throbs of color.. I love the Libra law bit, how she woos with her "rouge tears", the vision her wings whipping. It's a treat to read as always! My favorite line - "her roots reach into the reason of passion" Such a sage, philosophic line, melting with the spicy theme...excellent! Always, Laura
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 10/10/2015 3:33:00 AM
(: Oh! And big congrats on POTD!!! ~Laura
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/10/2015 1:31:00 AM
Her beauty be the color of passion itself, passion for life, knowledge, and love...thank you Laura, for understanding what makes this poem unique. I love it when you get excited sweet Poetess...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 6:30:00 PM
And it's a wonder to know midnight lives in my soul. I find attachment to the depth of this field. Linda
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 7:25:00 PM
Autumn provides the most enchanting Midnights Linda, it is no wonder that you are attached to the deep mystery of love...J.A.B.
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Date: 10/9/2015 6:31:00 PM
Congrats on poem of the Year:-D
Date: 10/9/2015 4:43:00 PM
Not surprised that this got a POTD. I'm glad to see you have a new post. You a have your own unique style, so vivid and deep is this love and passion for her. Congrats, Justin!
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 7:17:00 PM
My style is spent well on her Kim...your respect means much to me, thanks...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 1:48:00 PM
Congrats on poem of the day ;)
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 7:18:00 PM
It feels good Casarah...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 1:32:00 PM
Justin, a big congratulations on having this wonderful write selected as Poem Of The Day, enjoy the honor ~~
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 7:12:00 PM
Thank you Wings of Fire, your touch has brought me happiness...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 10:49:00 AM
Hey Justin, a hearty congratulations on your poem being chosen for POTD! A lovely ode filled with deep and passionate expressions of beauty in Nature's backdrop. Well deserving honor! Be Blessed, Neva
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 7:10:00 PM
To honor beauty is to honor the heart Neva. I feel blessed, thank you...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on Poem of the Day....
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 7:01:00 PM
This is a beautiful day for poetry to play Judy...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 7:16:00 AM
Justin, Congratulations on getting this amazing piece selected as poem of the day. Enjoy the honor:-)Alexis
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 6:52:00 PM
I am happy Alexis, for I know your beauty...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 7:03:00 AM
Justin....a 7. Your tribute to this woman is of the finest and highest caliber. She should swoon with such praise. Beautiful....
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 6:50:00 PM
I love your passion Eileen, and I am honored by your comment. My heart knows her swoon...J.A.B.
Date: 10/9/2015 2:56:00 AM
Beautiful Touching Nice
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/9/2015 6:47:00 PM
She is a most beautiful bloom Hans, thank you...J.A.B.
Date: 10/8/2015 6:56:00 AM
Excellent write Justin. I love how you entwined your beautiful piece with nature. Your write is extreme emotive and with passion of love, it is as I expected my lovely friend. A FAV and a seven for this romantic and careful wave of figures of speech. Your such a genius poet..............A.M.
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/8/2015 1:37:00 PM
Thank you for appreciating the natural passion of this poem...she is the Princess of Autumn...love and genius are born of the same star Afolabi...J.A.B.
Date: 10/7/2015 9:23:00 AM
Justin, l never tire of reading your pen. This write is so full of love , passion and desire. Sounds like an amazing woman. Who is this woman? Excellent job as always:-)Alexis 7
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Justin Bordner
Date: 10/7/2015 1:24:00 PM
Love won't allow us to tire Alexis...she is my Rebel Angel...J.A.B.

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