Love Tanka 1 - 02042022

In far-off places
More darkness than light - few rules
I have your heart, smile 
Power is cut, but I write
Your light: no blackouts ever

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Date: 2/5/2022 5:40:00 AM
Anil Anil Anil - To say this is beautiful is an understatement. Read back your words and you will see why. May your connections remain for all your devices. May you continue to be safe. Thank you for sharing such beauty and yes poetic thoughts too. Love and Blessings always with of course (smile) Shalom and Namaste
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Date: 2/4/2022 6:40:00 PM
When there is light inside, no black outs will ever affect ! Great tanka....Anil, you shine in adversity!
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Date: 2/4/2022 4:18:00 PM
Hello Anil, you found the way to write. Blessing my friend.
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Date: 2/4/2022 12:57:00 PM
Ah, blessed sweet light, you got that right poet dear :)
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Date: 2/4/2022 10:27:00 AM
So creative Anil~God is in control! Blessings, Paulette
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Date: 2/4/2022 8:31:00 AM
Absolutely perfect! "I get by with a little help from my friends..." Excellent, some of the best poetry I have ever read. I am reminded of that hotel commercial, thinking though more of God -- "I will keep the light" -- Joe.
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Date: 2/4/2022 8:15:00 AM
Awesome poem, Anil. Powerful ending line!
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