Love Pleiades
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My first attempt at this form. I enjoyed it.
Loneliness without it
Lustrous eyes reflect it
Loss of will without it
Loyalty sticks to it.
Lockets image shows it
Lullaby sings of it
Lyrical words laud it.
My first attempt not sure if it's correct but I enjoyed it.
John Derek Hamilton November 21, 2015
Copyright © John Hamilton | Year Posted 2015
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