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Love Pleiades

Loneliness without it Lustrous eyes reflect it Loss of will without it Loyalty sticks to it. Lockets image shows it Lullaby sings of it Lyrical words laud it. My first attempt not sure if it's correct but I enjoyed it. John Derek Hamilton November 21, 2015

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Date: 11/21/2015 2:07:00 PM
I think you have 7 syllables in the last line, John
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/21/2015 5:02:00 PM
It reads well, John.
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John Hamilton
Date: 11/21/2015 4:57:00 PM
corrected it thanks Lin.JDH

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