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September-26. 2023

It Happened on a Mosrty Mptning Collaboration Poetry Contest

Sponsor Charles Messina

Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew, Footprints stained the cobblestone. Where my love and I had walked, alone. By Charles Messina On that dawn, behind roses we sat, spotted by none, Resting my head on your breast with hearts beating as one, Holding hands and peering into your panther eyes, Seeing in those eyes, waves of desire surge and rise.

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/30/2023 9:08:00 PM

Valsa, your continuation of the poem is SO lovely and expressive~~romantic theme well conveyed! Janice

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/27/2023 6:26:00 AM

Ahhh!! So romantic is these lines. It reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your match up to Charles with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2023 6:20:00 AM

Bravo to both of you. I sighed while reading.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/26/2023 9:59:00 PM

Touching collaboration poetry, Valsa and Charlie. Seamless transition and filled with suspense, romance, and emotion. Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, my friends. Bill

Yann Rolland

Date: 9/26/2023 4:21:00 PM

this is beautiful , enchanting images to share passion, thank you .Valsa

Tom Woody

Date: 9/26/2023 8:48:00 AM

VA VA voom! Those panther eyes apparently have some awesome sex appeal. I like how you start out sweetly romantic and then build very quickly. We need another stanza lol

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/26/2023 5:51:00 AM

Valsa, This is exquisitely breathtaking and flawlessly harmonious for the prompt collaboration. Best wishes for the contest

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/26/2023 5:42:00 AM

Nice piece Valsa , so romantic and inspiring too. Blessings,Gordon

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2023 2:55:00 AM

Splendid poem as an addendum to Charles' stanza. So romantic.

Karen Jones

Date: 9/26/2023 2:29:00 AM

This in incredibly beautiful and a perfect collaboration. Best wishes for the contest!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/26/2023 2:07:00 AM

Oh my, such a romantic and love filled take for the collaboration contest, dear poetess!! I absolutely love your sumptuous wordplay and resplendent rhymes that create such a mellifluous ambience for the reader.. Gosh " Hearts beating as one" This poem feels like a sweet n fresh scent of petrichor.. "peering into your panther eyes" Amazing, I wish you the best of luck in the contest :)