Love Minichu

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" My true love was lovely in the beginning, is lovely in the middle,

and will be lovely till the end." _by Constance

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We always say love you when we have to go away- it is just our way and adieu ! He is my love, my moon, and my stars, my sunrise thereof ! My night, my life and day light ! We always say love you, my moon and my stars, my sunrise light ! _________________________ February 5, 2021 Poetry/Minichu/Rhyme/Love Minichu Copyright Protected, ID 02-1326-359-05 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Let's Minichu on Love sponsor, Mohan Chutani, Judged 05/03/2021 Honorable Mention

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Alexis Y.

Date: 3/5/2021 8:47:00 AM

Hi BW, Congratulations on your winning write. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2021 9:00:00 AM

Alexis, thanks for the congratulations on my Honorable Mention, appreciate _Constance

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 6:45:00 AM

Congratulations on the win Constance! Linda

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2021 9:01:00 AM

Linda, thank you for the congratulations on my Honorable Mention, grateful _Constance

Mohan Chutani

Date: 3/5/2021 4:06:00 AM

Constance, your Minichu would have placed much higher if your rhyming alignment of middle lines of each stanza was as requested. I think you have successfully done it in past, so what happened this time, I wonder. Anyway, Congrats for your placement. Best. Mohan.

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2021 9:02:00 AM

Mohan, thank you for my Honorable Mention even though I messed up, grateful _Constance

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 2/6/2021 10:22:00 AM

What a moving ode to the love that goes to the stars and back, a great entry for the contest~

Constance La France
Date: 3/5/2021 9:03:00 AM

Michelle, thank you for the visit and compliment _Constance

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/5/2021 6:24:00 PM

Wow, girl!! You have depicted the real essence of love with just few simple words dear Heart! My favourite stanza, let me quote, "He is my love, my moon, and my stars, my sunrise thereof!" Splendid !! Best wishes in the contest..A winner for me and a FAVE!!

Constance La France
Date: 2/7/2021 1:52:00 PM

JCB, thank you for the wonderful comment and the compliment, and the FAV which is the ultimate compliment _Constance