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Love in a Lane

A friend of mine took our photo So many years ago. There we were sitting on a running board, Sitting side by side, Loving each other and promising fidelity. We were parked in a lonely lane, Hid from watchers as we cared not to be seen Losing count of love as emotions thrilled. Until sunset meant time up, We left and returned to our homes. Until the day I proposed And what a wedding did we have.

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Date: 11/7/2022 10:09:00 AM
Sweet, romantic memories of brief meaningful moments :)
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Date: 11/7/2022 4:54:00 AM
A nice snapshot of your love! <3
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Date: 11/6/2022 8:07:00 AM
Poets can live without much...Rodolfo and friends in their cold French Dwelling. Little food, little warmth, but having passion galore. Your lovely write brought back dear memories. Have a great day my friend!
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Date: 11/6/2022 7:14:00 AM
Blessings for ever from those moments spent. Lovely verse. You made me think of the times in my youth. Many Blessings to you my friend
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Date: 11/6/2022 6:45:00 AM
Blessed times, Victor, always and forever in the memory.
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Date: 11/6/2022 3:21:00 AM
Im sure your wedding was phenomenal and left you with such happy memories that you will never forget. HUGS AND BLESSINGS, JENNIFER.
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Date: 11/5/2022 11:52:00 PM
Beautiful memories of the time past. We live in those memories. What a beautiful rendezvous for the lovers to meet!
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Date: 11/5/2022 11:28:00 PM
Wow, love your memories, Victor.
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Date: 11/5/2022 4:32:00 PM
What a charming scenario, played out on a lover's lane, and ending in happy marriage. This is a fave for me. :)
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Date: 11/5/2022 12:40:00 PM
- Good memories last the longest ... lovely poem, Victor :) - hugs
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Date: 11/5/2022 11:30:00 AM
Happy memories that stay with you forever. Hope your weekend is going well Victor. Tom
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Date: 11/5/2022 5:44:00 AM
Victor, your poetry has a pleasant tone. Incredibly heartwarming flashbacks of happier times!
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Date: 11/5/2022 5:14:00 AM
A lovely walk down Memory Lane Victor, enjoyed the read… Belle
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Date: 11/5/2022 5:09:00 AM
Wonderfully reminiscing in the joy of yore! Enjoyed the voice of your poem, Victor.
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Date: 11/5/2022 4:30:00 AM
Nostalgic!
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Date: 11/5/2022 3:37:00 AM
The good old days Victor, sitting on a running board, parked in a quiet lane, time to go home at sunset, How things have changed. Your courtship sounds very special Victor, and wonderful memories of your wedding. Your poem was very well written. Do you still have that photo ?
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Date: 11/5/2022 3:35:00 AM
Warm love memories:)
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Date: 11/5/2022 3:31:00 AM
Lovely warm story, Victor. Nice to hear. Elizabeth
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Date: 11/5/2022 3:00:00 AM
About your lovely wife Victor? Lovely ! Debx
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