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Love Fish.....A Word Morph

Seaward seeking...on a voyage finding LOVE Empty hands and heart left me with none to LOSE But somewhere southbound, the compass left me LOST No bearing back or finding that....which I wanted MOST Rocking through vengeful waves, blinded by the MIST A Map of loves failed pursuit... balled up in my FIST Pulled in wet dripping nets, with not one FISH

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/25/2009 3:24:00 PM
Steve - Congratulations on your win in the morph contest! Peace always, John
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Date: 1/25/2009 3:00:00 PM
Congratulations on placing third Steve, this was a complex challenge. I like to see how everyone brings different structures to their submissions. Great work...Raul
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Date: 1/24/2009 6:38:00 AM
Steve congratulations on placing third in the contest - well deserved - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 1/24/2009 3:43:00 AM
What a sad write, well done and congrats on your win! Love, Kristin
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Date: 1/23/2009 5:28:00 PM
Congrats on your win... a nice morph poem... Constance
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:17:00 PM
this is really nice...congrats on your win!....awesome job!...Maryam
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Date: 1/23/2009 3:53:00 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. Excelent write. Love, robin
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Date: 1/23/2009 12:31:00 PM
Wow, sorry I missed this Steve. A totally excellent poem even aside from being morphed! Congrats on your well deserved win in the contest! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/23/2009 10:27:00 AM
Loved this tongue and cheek morph poem!! Congratulations....a fun winning poem!!! So clever. Well done, and well deserving a winning place in Nigel's contest!~Love, Carrie
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Date: 1/7/2009 8:43:00 PM
Great job! The morph made quite a story...a fun challenge! Good luck in the contest!~ Carrie
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