Love Fish.....A Word Morph

Seaward seeking...on a voyage finding LOVE
 Empty hands and heart left me with none to LOSE
But somewhere southbound, the compass left me LOST
 No bearing back or finding that....which I wanted MOST
Rocking through vengeful waves, blinded by the MIST
 A Map of loves failed pursuit... balled up in my FIST
Pulled in wet dripping nets,  with not one FISH
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Heck Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 3:24 PM
Steve - Congratulations on your win in the morph contest! Peace always, John
Moreno Avatar
January 25, 2009 at 3:00 PM
Congratulations on placing third Steve, this was a complex challenge. I like to see how everyone brings different structures to their submissions. Great work...Raul
Jordan Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 6:38 AM
Steve congratulations on placing third in the contest - well deserved - God Bless, MJ
Reynolds Avatar
January 24, 2009 at 3:43 AM
What a sad write, well done and congrats on your win! Love, Kristin
La France Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 5:28 PM
Congrats on your win... a nice morph poem... Constance
Haniff Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 4:17 PM
this is really nice...congrats on your win!....awesome job!...Maryam
Gass Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 3:53 PM
Congratulations on your well deserved win. Excelent write. Love, robin
Winter Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 12:31 PM
Wow, sorry I missed this Steve. A totally excellent poem even aside from being morphed! Congrats on your well deserved win in the contest! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
January 23, 2009 at 10:27 AM
Loved this tongue and cheek morph poem!! Congratulations....a fun winning poem!!! So clever. Well done, and well deserving a winning place in Nigel's contest!~Love, Carrie
Richards Avatar
January 7, 2009 at 8:43 PM
Great job! The morph made quite a story...a fun challenge! Good luck in the contest!~ Carrie
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