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Love' Dance

A stolen fragile melody, caressed When fiery lovers dance in a world claimed With desire neither spoken or addressed Leaves ashes smoldering none proclaim Loneliness the silent bridge lovers cross To remove themselves from a sadder place And continues their journey with pathos With minutes of passion and crystal space Though their hearts are beating, they'll always grieve When flames burn cold from a love never dared Can fill an emptiness with arms that leave Love without meaning nor paradise shared It was only motion in this love's dance Frightened by the life of true romance contest A love lost, then found, only to lose again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 8/26/2016 2:50:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your fine placement on this short list of winners! Very deep and meaningful...a lovely Sonnet. Sandra
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Date: 8/26/2016 10:47:00 AM
Frederic, beautifully written dear man..congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 8/26/2016 9:39:00 AM
If only....one could dare more...enjoyed it. Congrats on your win! :D
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Date: 8/2/2016 7:23:00 PM
Elegantly crafted Sonnet, Frederic, I'm sure it will do well. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/30/2016 4:15:00 PM
such a redeeming thought so well quilled, frederick...much enjoyed!..huggs
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Date: 7/29/2016 9:48:00 PM
wow amazing how well you did this in the sonnet form. Beautiful work, Frederic
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Date: 7/29/2016 2:34:00 PM
Frederic a lovely write for the contest, well done ~
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Date: 7/28/2016 3:16:00 PM
- Whoever does not dare ..... nothing to win - A lovely sonnet, Frederic - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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