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Lost Love

LOST LOVE Had he ever truly come close to me? An ascetic appeared in the morning. As nonchalant, he left casually. My humble yearnings expected something. Had he paid any furtive attention? Why had he come again at noon? By chance? He had not lifted his eyes, but just gone! My eyes were too anxious to greet his glance. Had he reared shallow feelings for me? Why had he ventured to enter my room? Just to hold my hand, he did not feel free. My tingling passion was about to bloom. Had I lost my love? Had he come truly? How could I endure? I loved him dearly. 01/18/18

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Date: 2/12/2018 4:12:00 PM
Returning with big congratulations, Anisha, for your wonderful placement in the contest. Lovely to read once more. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/12/2018 3:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Anisha, great write . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 2/12/2018 2:39:00 PM
Congrats on your placement, Anisha. I really enjoyed the original tone of your poem.
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Date: 2/12/2018 8:32:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, congrats on placing in my contest!
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Date: 2/9/2018 11:44:00 PM
Very beautiful and original! I like especially how you do not say too much, but just enough to allow the reader a participation.
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Date: 1/19/2018 8:44:00 PM
Anisha, beautiful emotional expression wrapped in lovely and sad poetic lines of lost love and yearning.. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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