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Lost In the Woods

. Heaven hones the sun Spilling splintered shards of light A million lanterns ------------------------------------ Entered for Raul's Contest "Ascension"

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2010 2:33:00 PM

Yes, this one was really cool, as Deb pointed out below here. I think I had never gotten around to seeing the winners of this contest. Congratulations, and you are right, probably my "indelible" prince charming would have ended up disappointing me! Luv, andrea

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 12/14/2009 4:55:00 PM

wowser! loved the use of the word "hones" most excellent verse! Light & Love

Daniel Perez

Date: 12/2/2009 8:12:00 AM

enjoyed reading this Haiku,really drew a vivid picture in my mind. . . . .by the way Mr.Lopez is my art teacher he told me about your work

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 12/2/2009 8:11:00 AM

This is lovely Carrie and congrats on your win. I love 'splintered shards of light" and thank you for you comment on my poem - I have been away from the Soup all summer and need to get back to writing!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 12/1/2009 6:53:00 PM

Very nice Carrie and congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Abe Lopez

Date: 11/30/2009 7:35:00 PM

a great visual painted with these words..... very creative thoughts....:-)

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/30/2009 4:43:00 AM

Carrie, this haiku is absolutely brilliant! Warmest congrats to you. Boy, I am not used to this site anymore, where does it say I placed in Debbie's contest??? Thanks so much. love & hugs, shar xoxoxo

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 11/27/2009 11:35:00 AM

Congratulations Carrie, on your success Raul Moreno’s “Ascension” contest with this lovely haiku. (…Sorry to be so late. Don’t they say better late than never? I’m finally reading these winners. xoxoxox) . Your poetic skills shine. Lovingly, Dane Ann

James Fraser

Date: 11/25/2009 10:12:00 AM

Excellent Haiku Carrie, big congrats on your winning piece in Raul's contest >> James

Brandee Augustus

Date: 11/24/2009 2:38:00 PM

Yet another word I couldn't think of to describe the light----shards. I think I like how this contest got everyone to describe the light differently but the same. Congratulations with this winner! I like this!

Brian Strand

Date: 11/24/2009 3:43:00 AM

Congrats on your success in Raul's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian

Elaine George

Date: 11/24/2009 3:36:00 AM

Carrie, this isa such an up-lifting and spiritual Haiku. Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest, and thank you for your kind comments. Much love, Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/24/2009 3:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's Ascension contest Carrie. Love, Carol

Donna Golden

Date: 11/23/2009 11:15:00 PM

Carrie, congratulations on your win in Raul's contest! Hugs, Donna

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2009 9:42:00 PM

Congrats, Carrie, on your winning poem in Raul's contest... well deserved winning poem from your creative pen.. blessings .. luv ... Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"