Lord Valentine's Heart

To thee, my love, I send a well worn heart
though wrapped in crimson satin and unbeating
I fill it with sweet meats and love's entreating's
Oh please return, we've been too long apart.

I brood at break of dawn and setting sun
behind the velvet cloth of our bower.
I stare from arched turrets in our tower
and strain to hear the homeward hoof beats start.

Hear me now return, I'm left with but a part
of a life not worth living without my dove.
Your Valentine is but a token love,
for needs be, I've much more to impart.

To thee, my better half, my sweetest bride
will you return to me, will you homeward ride.


*A Canzone is a pre-curser to the sonnet
and has 10-11 mixed metered lines, I have used
Dante's end rhyme pattern [abbcdeeccffcgg]

Contest: Your Best Rhyme
Poet: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Harper Avatar
March 27, 2013 at 6:38 PM
Thanks for the introduction to the Canzone, Debbie, this is a lovely Valentine poem, enjoyed it.
Mandani Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:41 PM
Where art thou, that used to ride homeward with me? / Knowest thou not that I have much to impart thee?
Gorelick Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:37 PM
Congrats Deb! Whoa, this form seems conplicated! BG
Dietrich Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 6:11 PM
deb, you did outstandingly well with yours!! The form, the theme. So nice!!! Congrats on the winners list. You were braver than I to try this contest!! (I actually have a poem similar to this one of yours but not using the antiquated language the contest required!!)
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 7:45 AM
Congratulation on your win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
Ryerson Avatar
February 22, 2013 at 4:05 AM
'I brood at break of dawn and setting sun'...wow cher, great line!...Congrats, my friend - Tim
May Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 7:07 PM
congrats on a great win Debbie
Roberts Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:48 PM
Congrats Debbie ....Seren
Jones Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 6:00 PM
Congrats......
A   Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 5:15 PM
Debbie, Congratulations with your THEES and Thous, :-)..always~ LINDA
Richards Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 4:47 PM
And once again, you (not surprising) took the form and made your entry more difficult! You are often under estimated......taking the road less traveled!! I applaud!!
Squyres Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 12:06 PM
One valentine missing the other !! Well written, Debbie !! Congrats on your win !!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 9:18 AM
Another astounding win oh cool one, congratulations xx
Carrillo Avatar
January 29, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Debbie; I loved it from the begininng to the end. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
Duncan Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Every time I read something of yours I learn something,, thank you for reading my "family Hair" Have a blessed day Debbie ;}
Kendrick Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 1:07 PM
Interesting penned lines..Great imagination that you must have..Thanks for stopping by my work "Asparagus"..Sara
Amezimi Avatar
January 26, 2013 at 6:00 AM
the rhythm is great
Zerbst Avatar
January 25, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Great poem with a good sense of the old time. Beautiful but sad situation here, which means you did a fantastic job of capturing the emotions.
Jones Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 10:03 PM
Well you professionals sure talk above my head all I know is this is lovely and sounds like music. You put a wanna be to shame but I just love hanging around you guys.
Villarosa Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 7:24 PM
Very interesting to read this Canzone poem, Debbie. The rhyme flows perfectly with romantic words to remember.(^_^)
Dietrich Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 4:38 PM
very interesting about this canzone form, Debs. I think I heard of it but never really knew what it was exactly. Great little example poem for it!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 24, 2013 at 10:28 AM
I'm on my way ..... lol like it xx soup
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