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Look With Me

Look with me at what I see For miles across the mountain hills Where serenity is found beyond every tree Rivers flow with currents of movement Like the energy of life we sustain The snow glitters on the ground, sparkling The open fields wait for the wildlife For you to watch, the moose, deer and turkey Look with me at what I see Skies that change color by the hour A new masterpiece, each time to see High rocky cliffs that shine with ice Pines so tall, reaching for the heavens Look with me at what I see Maybe you will feel this peace too And be blessed by all this and so much more! Heidi Sands 12/26/18

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Date: 12/26/2018 9:46:00 PM
Lovely rhythm, punctuated and accented by your recurring line, "Look with me at what I see." Lovely poem, lovingly done. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/27/2018 4:44:00 AM
Thank you for the kind feedback! I appreciate it :)
Date: 12/26/2018 6:42:00 PM
What an enviable view you have--wonderfully captured! Peace in the company of nature.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/26/2018 6:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay. I am happy to see your comment :)
Date: 12/26/2018 6:28:00 PM
Another post Holiday beauty - dreamy.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/26/2018 6:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Sunlite ! I appreciate your comment and support always :)
Date: 12/26/2018 5:23:00 PM
'High rocky cliffs that shine with ice' - that is the line that grabbed me the most, though it is all so lovely!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/26/2018 5:24:00 PM
Thank you Michelle :)
Date: 12/26/2018 4:09:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this wonderful scene with your poetry. This was beautiful Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/26/2018 4:14:00 PM
You are welcome and I am so happy you appreciate it Chris. Thank you for being so kind to me :)

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