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Long Awaited Moment

Train’s whistle fades among a crowd A soldier calls her name aloud; Greets his wife... waiting joy endowed Moment of fate blessed by love's shroud. Form M- Monorhyme Contest 4/14/2017 Sponsor: Broken Wings

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Date: 4/22/2017 6:59:00 PM
Back to congratulate you hugs ~*
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Date: 4/20/2017 2:36:00 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderful Monorhyme. I could just picture the scene
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Date: 4/19/2017 8:22:00 AM
Hi Nette, I could picture it all in my mind. Well done. Congratulations on your fine win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 4/18/2017 7:41:00 PM
Awesome:-)
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Date: 4/15/2017 9:08:00 AM
A soulful monorhyme, Nette:) says a lot:)
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Date: 4/14/2017 10:25:00 AM
how fleeting the moment, how strong its embrace..good luck
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Date: 4/14/2017 1:46:00 AM
Marvelous Monorhyme dearest, nette. A 7! Happy Easter my friend!
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Date: 4/13/2017 11:07:00 PM
I like Jan, felt the sadness in the last line!
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Date: 4/13/2017 7:51:00 PM
beautiful but such a sad ending to your rhyme Nette:-( Good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/13/2017 7:34:00 PM
A great rhyme, Nette. Best of luck and have a wonderful weekend.
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