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Long Ago Fond Memories

I see it now in memory, My mama’s dining table, I’d like to sit at it again If only I were able. I get a fuzzy feeling when I find them in recall, Five brothers, Daddy, Sister And Mama most of all. We did not have to be called twice To gather in our places. A compliment to Mama’s food, Were those eight eager faces. A big bowl of potatoes and A like sized plate of meat, Mama’s delicious home made bread, Some of the things to eat. I sat in my own special chair Right by my daddy’s side. He filled my plate and cut my meat. And gazed at all with pride. We had not yet begun to scatter. My older brothers were still there. My entire world was in that room. I lived with out a care. I know the secret ingredient Flavoring my Mama’s food Was the love that saturated it And made it taste so good. I hope I’ve made you feel it And have also made you see Why Mama’s dining table is My fondest memory. 3 way tie for 2nd place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/28/2010 6:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank Herrera's "Fondest Memory" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:38:00 PM
I definitely felt that love, Joyce-- this sure made me smile and how lucky of you to have these treasured memories with your family during mealtimes--I think families these days somehow lose that-- super congrats to you-- so happy to share 2nd place with you & Andrea :) --have a wonderful Christmas :) --nikko :)
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Date: 12/20/2010 10:17:00 PM
nostalgia breaths, joyce! a gem of glittering of beaded wordings… kudos for a well-deserved win!!
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:40:00 PM
I knew this one was a winner. many congratulations for this win.
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:36:00 PM
wow, this is mouth watering GOOD, JOyce. It's a bit like mine. Fondest memories , I think, always take place in the home , the long ago home. Congratulations on a very well deserved win .LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/20/2010 8:06:00 PM
Such bliss and harmony, such innocence, and the best of all such simplicity, this is beautiful Joyce, Congrats. Harry
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:20:00 PM
You really touched my heart with this one, Joyce. Congratulations on your placement! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved second place win in the contest of frank, Joyce
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Date: 12/20/2010 6:47:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your big win in the Fondest Memories contest with this superb write and entry my friend.. enjoy another top winning spot for a brilliant poem with luv.. happy holidays...
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Date: 12/8/2010 5:28:00 AM
I am reading some very amazing and diverse poetry this morning. I am glad yours was among the poetry I was able to read today. Thank you for sharing your writing with us Joyce. Wishing you and yours a wonderful Holiday Season. Love,Carol
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Date: 12/8/2010 5:11:00 AM
Such fond and beautiful memories Joyce. Your wonderful poem made me feel a part of your table. All the best for the contest.
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Date: 12/8/2010 12:00:00 AM
Your wonderful memories of the family gathering for dinner brought back memories for me too, Joyce. No one called us twice. She was a great cook and dinner was the time when we all shared stories from our daily activities. I agree with Barbara. This deserves to rank high! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 12/7/2010 11:34:00 PM
I love this..it brought back so many memories...so many families dont eat together anymore..what a shame. This is going to do well in the contest. BG
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