Long Ago

Our horses are running to save our lives
Distance traveled to far to describe

The horse's quick hooves trample the grass
Never to slow, their hearts must surpass

Faster they go, with eyes firmly fixed
In changing terrain fences of sticks

We brothers in arms since royal birth
Lords of this Kingdom, he is the first

Glistening swords always kept clean
Carried arrows and quivers, since we were wean

Chased for miles, since sun's first light
Hope and our horse, we'll carry us this night

All there is, a royal honor to claim
A blood-stained sword, to hold our name

In songs of valor, our deeds will lend
Before night grays, our lives may end

3/27/20
contest Some Paradise Where Horses Go
contest judged 4/2/20
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Hamilton Avatar
June 17, 2020 at 10:32 AM
Nice write Frederic, congrats on placing in my contest!
La France Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 8:48 PM
Frederic, beautiful poem and love the music video, and I love horses _Constance
Manassian Avatar
March 28, 2020 at 7:31 AM
That ending couplet is poetic gold. I've missed your writing, Frederic. I've been away for a time, but am getting back into the thick of things. This poem is really full of splendor. Honor must be upheld at any cost. Good luck in the contest.
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March 27, 2020 at 8:56 PM
A powerful poem. Reminds me of The Crusades or Knights of The Roundtable.
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