Lonesome Randy

There was a young fellow named Randy,
Whom girls thought a little too handy.
They all ran away
On Valentine’s Day,
Although they accepted his candy.

Poor Randy was very down hearted.
His candy and he were soon parted.
Not one little kiss
From any sweet miss 
Though economy he restarted.





For Francine's Valentine Limerick contest  4th place
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Guzzi Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 4:48 PM
Great meter HUZZAH! smooch Tadaaaaaha Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
Fraser Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 2:22 PM
Poor old Randy, many congrats Joyce on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)
Brown Avatar
January 27, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
George   Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 4:00 PM
Awesome! Joyce. Congrat's on your big win, Lainie
Freeman Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Beautiful job, Joyce, on a worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses
Calhoun Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Hi Joyce - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
Neels Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Joyce, super congratulations on your win in the contest ;) love Wilma
Pettit Avatar
January 26, 2011 at 1:36 AM
congrats Joyce on your 4th place win in the contest
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 9:49 PM
what a cute ending on that last line. Gosh, I must have missed seeing this one earlier. This is a truly deserving one of a win! congatulations, JOyce. LUv, Andrea
Mannan Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:32 PM
Tons of congrats for this great win.
Sweetheart Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:30 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
Mehta Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 7:14 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
Richards Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 6:43 PM
How cute is this.....well done, Joyce!! Congratulations on your winning poem!
Roberts Avatar
January 25, 2011 at 5:54 PM
congrats Joyce on your 4th place win in my contest
Gorelick Avatar
January 22, 2011 at 6:19 AM
Funny one...Maybe we can turn the economy around by buying more candy..works for me..loved your poem. B G
Mannan Avatar
January 21, 2011 at 8:46 PM
Real super limerick Joyce. All the best for the contest.
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