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Lonesome Randy

There was a young fellow named Randy, Whom girls thought a little too handy. They all ran away On Valentine’s Day, Although they accepted his candy. Poor Randy was very down hearted. His candy and he were soon parted. Not one little kiss From any sweet miss Though economy he restarted. For Francine's Valentine Limerick contest 4th place

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Date: 1/27/2011 4:48:00 PM
Great meter HUZZAH! smooch Tadaaaaaha Congrad's on your win! Light & Love
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Date: 1/27/2011 2:22:00 PM
Poor old Randy, many congrats Joyce on your fine win in Francine's contest....:)
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Date: 1/27/2011 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations Joyce on your win in Francine's contest "Valentine's Day Limerick". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/26/2011 4:00:00 PM
Awesome! Joyce. Congrat's on your big win, Lainie
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:48:00 AM
Beautiful job, Joyce, on a worthy poem's honor. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:06:00 AM
Hi Joyce - Congratulations on your WIN in Francine's contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/26/2011 6:17:00 AM
Joyce, super congratulations on your win in the contest ;) love Wilma
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Date: 1/26/2011 1:36:00 AM
congrats Joyce on your 4th place win in the contest
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Date: 1/25/2011 9:49:00 PM
what a cute ending on that last line. Gosh, I must have missed seeing this one earlier. This is a truly deserving one of a win! congatulations, JOyce. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:32:00 PM
Tons of congrats for this great win.
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:30:00 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super special win in the Valentine Day contest with this awesome entry my friend.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
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Date: 1/25/2011 7:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Joyce
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Date: 1/25/2011 6:43:00 PM
How cute is this.....well done, Joyce!! Congratulations on your winning poem!
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Date: 1/25/2011 5:54:00 PM
congrats Joyce on your 4th place win in my contest
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Date: 1/22/2011 6:19:00 AM
Funny one...Maybe we can turn the economy around by buying more candy..works for me..loved your poem. B G
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Date: 1/21/2011 8:46:00 PM
Real super limerick Joyce. All the best for the contest.
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