Little Girl Once Lost

My fingers trace your
silhouette,
all I have is
a shadow of you.
Sensitive shoulders
that held me up
in my mind 
forever I choose. 
A child naïve, 
empty and alone, 
without a father
who left to roam.
I was once your
little girl Daddy,
till that fateful day
when you said
goodbye to Mummy,
oh, how it did rain.
But years have moved on
I’m your little girl 
no longer, 
but my heart needs to
reach out to you, to
tell of your grandson
who needs his grandpa, 
and not an ancient
photograph
forever fading, 
unlike my
memory of you.

 © Harry J Horsman 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 9:00 PM
The longing to be connected with a person who has been once so dear , but now faded out is so touchingly expressed. How grand children long for the love of their grand parents ! It evokes sad memories in me . My sons didn't have the fortune of seeing their grandfather on either side!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Congratulations for your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. Your pen was writing over time on this one. Have a blessed day..............
Faulkner Avatar
July 30, 2021 at 7:19 AM
Back to wish you congratulations on your win, harry, well done~
Y. Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 2:42 PM
Hi Harry, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 10:52 AM
Congratulations for your win Harry :)
One Avatar
July 29, 2021 at 6:47 AM
Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...
Proxenos Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:51 AM
A brilliant poem Harry, and your story is so touching - I am almost certain this will be a 1st win because it is a breathtaking poem. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 7:12 AM
This put a lump in my throat Harry. Simply brilliant my friend.
Kendrick Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 4:03 AM
Very expressive and emotive work you have penned in this one like something you may have lived or was close to someone who lived this life. There is always a chance of reconnection and mending of broken relationships if each party is willing to give just a little. Thanks for your kind review of my work. Sara
Lawrence Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 3:21 PM
Harry, So deep and poignant with stark emotional images. "all I have is a shadow of you." I can feel your words and memories of time past and the longing for reconnection. Wonderful.. Susan :)
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 11:07 PM
I love this, what inspiration there must have been xx
Buehler Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 7:27 PM
Poignant and masterfully wrought, this anacreontic verse is quite an impressive contest entry. Good luck! :)
Laurie Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:54 PM
Hello Harry ... very emotional indeed. There will be many who read your verse and wipe a tear from their eye - thank you Harry - Lindsay
Theraven Avatar
April 15, 2021 at 7:35 AM
Hello Harry, A familiar family repurposed. Will they all remember where they belong one day. Very nice sentiment lying just beneath the surface. -Richard
Dietrich Avatar
April 14, 2021 at 2:14 PM
Hi, Harry, I can't find recent poems of yours that I have not seen, but I sure hope this one does well in the contest. Thanks so much for seeing MY recent poem. Post up more and more poetry for us!
Sirikye  Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 10:26 AM
Emotional. We always want our loved ones by our side at all times. But for reasons and circumstances beyond our control, we just can't. Lovely poem Harry. Blessings
Nicole Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 6:06 PM
*Fading memory of you* This thought touches my heart so deeply. The entire poem is filled with tender emotions. The sad truth is, this happens more than it should. Which is heartbreaking. ~ Brandy
Sands Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 2:22 PM
A well written, very special poem, Harry :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 1:55 PM
I think this form is so nice for your writing style Harry. YOu did awesome with it. Great emotive writing.
Edmonds  Avatar
April 11, 2021 at 9:41 AM
Hi Harry, you’ve come up with a heartbreaker for sure, a sad tale written extremely well. All the best... Belle
Y. Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:46 PM
WoW! Harry, What a well written yet sad entry. You nailed this contest challenge. Best wishes in the contest my friend. Have a wonderful evening:-) Alexis
Andresen Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 1:38 PM
- "all I have is a shadow of you "... wonderful and touching written, Harry - Best wishes in the contest ... a top winning poem in my eyes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Faulkner Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 11:16 AM
So melancholy and touching, great imagery, like 'a shadow of you' and 'I'm your little girl/no longer' - shows how even as we become adults, we still need the connection to that parental figure from our past ~
Pandit Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 5:39 AM
I can feel her longing for her baby's grandpa. Emotive write--splendidly done, Harry.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 12:44 AM
Beautifully done.
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