Notes About The Poem

Today, is the birthday of a very close friend, like family to me, one that has been there for me through highs and lows. And i take this opportunity to write a poem about her, lionness on paper, she is not just a poet, but an artist, with many talents and a very strong soul that i can proudly say i have the honor to see and celebrate closely not just today but always. 
and is the reason why i chose to write also about her for Tom Woodys contest on a special poet. 
Happy birthday Lionness papi! Keep shining! 

Lioness On Paper

Seasons have more reasons  
to celebrate an innovative artist  
who speaks in colorful dialects—  
when abstract silence kicks in  
and suffocates the petals dried  
and left as bookmarks  
within pages of the past.
I see the opalescent rays burst through  
the ashen skies the day  
the ink of your soul did flow  
in fluorescent hues  
across the faceless canvas of life.

You knew the synonymous metaphors  
to calm rivers of raging riddles.  
Your spirit is like  
a supernova colliding in the night,  
shining forth with lyrical light.

Words fail to glamorize how  
you beautify my world.  
You paint with brushstrokes of sincerity,  
illuminating the void of vulnerability,  
effortlessly curating compassion  
with pristine pigments of empathy.

Today and always, I celebrate  
the tulip stars that shimmer,  
aligning constellations in favor,  
to guide you to a poetic sphere  
where thoughts splattered  
in charcoal and gray  
would flicker hope and peace  
upon your aesthetic aura,  
as time and space cannot steal  
the lioness psyche which glows  
like periwinkle confetti.

I thank the Universe for your  
ethereal existence.  
You turn the gloominess of midnights  
into rainbow-rinsed radiance,  
awakening the sleeping sun  
to ascend and unravel  
    acrylic beams of blissfulness. 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Woods Avatar
August 21, 2024 at 8:45 AM
Wonderful and a keep sake...congratulations! Xo
George Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 7:03 PM
"You turn the gloominess of midnights into rainbow-rinsed radiance, awakening the sleeping sun to ascend and unravel acrylic beams of blissfulness." ! What more is needed to highlight a person whom you hold dear to your heart. I don't have much familiarity with her, except the comments I see under all your poems. I know she is one of your fans among many. I am sure she is worthy of your admiration. Your talent I do admire and your poems never lack its lustre any time. You are Empress and your friend is lioness. Congratulations on your well deserved placement.
Anaya Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 9:31 AM
Radiant and generous Empress! Charmed! Congratulations! ~hugs
mysore Avatar
August 20, 2024 at 2:38 AM
An Empress write on A Lioness, lovely, charming! congratulations.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 5:28 PM
Congratulations, Dear Empress, on a fabulous win. The title itself "Lioness On Paper" is a striking one, demonstarting your creativity from the very beginning. This is a wonderful tribute to someone you picture as "Words fail to glamorize how... with pristine pigments of empathy." I also find poetic device like alliteration, "rainbow-rinsed radiance" is one of your favourites. Thank you, Gifted Poetess, for gifting us beautiful poems like this one! Love and hugs ~ Mala
Croft Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 4:17 PM
A beautiful tribute. Congratulations.
Dietrich Avatar
August 19, 2024 at 1:34 PM
A wonderful tribute. I forget if you told me this person's name or not. Do they go by Lioness here at Soup? Big congrats on your win. Oh I read your funny conversation way down here on the thread. So glad your friend really loved her tribute.
George Avatar
August 9, 2024 at 4:13 AM
A lovely friend you are Dear Ink. I love to see friendship cared for, valued and celebrated. Our soulmates are sometimes friends. You have written this with so much love and sincerity and your kindness and love will keep the foundation of this friendship soaring. I can't ignore the metaphorical goodness and placidity this piece brings. "Words fail to glamorize how you beautify my world." I hope people get to see how much value their friends bring and celebrate them. Happy birthday Lioness.
Manassian Avatar
August 1, 2024 at 9:57 PM
You knew the synonymous metaphors to calm rivers of raging riddles... how did your mind come up with this? I'm dumbfounded. Curating passion... so many gems in this piece. Your friend must be proud of this lovely tribute. Good luck in the contest.
Alhemaidy Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Beautiful poem! Best wish to your friend! Beautiful birthday!
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Thank you so much Abdullah good to hear from you as always
Rose  Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:48 PM
the lioness psyche which glows like periwinkle confetti. I could swear some days that you own a magic wand that turns your eyes to a kaleidoscopic view, one we cannot see, so thank you for describing it with so much color and view, I love it.
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 6:50 AM
Awwn haha she is quite colorful, ask her she had periwinkle hair once and also green and blue. So i bet i did try to describe her to some extent thank you sweet rose always a pleasure hearing from you
Greenhough Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:47 PM
I'd be delighted to have your poem written for me. I imagine your friend will feel honored. I like how you praised her with hints of words and metaphors. May I add, Happy Birthday.
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 6:52 AM
Awwn i would love to write about you too dear hilda: you are so kind and thoughtful thank you so very much alway
One Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 1:42 PM
A lovely poem and clever idea to write about her for Tommy's contest... I hope the lioness had a great birthday... I like how you touch upon the themes of creativity, inspiration, and the transformative power of art. Your poem celebrates an "innovative artist" whose work transcends the mundane, transforming silence and darkness into vibrant expression. The imagery is rich and evocative, with "opalescent rays" breaking through "ashen skies" and "fluorescent hues" flowing from the soul, suggesting a luminous and transformative artistic presence.
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 6:55 AM
Awwn thank you for such a detailed and thoughtful comment dear silent one! Always grateful for your support and kindness
Onclaud Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 12:32 PM
a most heartfelt citation for a good friend...your ink pours into.a spin!
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 6:55 AM
Awwn thank you dear nette appreciate you very much
Hind Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 11:26 AM
How kind to write that! I am sure lioness appreciates it. <3
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 7:01 AM
Awwn paige i would love to write about you as well kind soul thank you so much
DiMino Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 10:05 AM
"an innovative artist who speaks in colorful dialects" -- Love that! "You paint with brushstrokes of sincerity," -- Beautiful. 80% of art is sincerity...Sincere vehicle will draw the talent. "You turn the gloominess of midnights into rainbow-rinsed radiance," -- Beautiful writing my friend. Blessings.
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 7:04 AM
Ah so good to hear from you dear joe. Thank you so very much always for being so kind and generous with your time and with reviewing. Sending you light
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Ink Empress this is so beautiful! What a wonderful poet she is and you have written the best birthday tribute ever! I like many lines but this says it all, “You turn the gloominess of midnights into rainbow-rinsed radiance, awakening the sleeping sun to ascend and unravel acrylic beams of blissfulness.” Happiest of birthdays Lioness on Paper!
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 7:09 AM
Awwn karen you are so sweet to wish her and leave such a thoughtful and beautiful comment: really: im so grateful always for your kindness truly
Buhagiar Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 6:39 AM
Happy birthday and a great tribute to a close friend. As usual a great poem. I especially loved your last stanza. Truly divine.
Empress Avatar
July 31, 2024 at 7:08 AM
Awwn thank you so much dear victor so kind of you to wish her. And leave your comment, grateful for your support
Onpaper Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 4:42 AM
Awwwwwn papi!!!! I am soooo touched by this piece … synonymous metaphors to calm rivers of raging riddles…. Aeewwwwn… u the calm rivers of my raging riddles papi !! Words fail to glamorize how you beautify my world… all day everyday aeee !!! I shall sweat a million tears from my pores for u aeee .. I thank the Universe for your ethereal existence… damn papi… u touch me in the feelings!! Love u to bits n pieces!! You r my world my everything my pillar
Empress Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 5:46 AM
Hahahah
Onpaper Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 5:42 AM
We gay for each other !!! U can deny it all u want!!! I see it in ur eyes!!! The love is real!!!!
Empress Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 4:55 AM
Hahah ppl be thinking we are gay! But thank you papi! You are always appreciated! Much love always!
Rhymes Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 4:31 AM
Happy birthday lioness . Such a cute tribute to our lioness .
Empress Avatar
July 30, 2024 at 4:56 AM
Awwn yes just a quick one
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