Like a Baby's Birth

Writing a poem is like giving birth to a baby. With the copulation of fancy and thought, Comes the moment of conception! It swims into you as a seed, so tiny, so inconspicuous Once pregnancy is confirmed, comes irritation, nausea Lethargy and loss of appetite All the while you begin to realize That a new life, independent of you Has begun growing inside you Then all the care taken to foster the young life You withdraw, take rest and relax in solitude Slowly the fetus moves, the first stirring of life! With fond fingers, as you pat your belly, Your pen pats the paper. The first line comes like the first beating of the heart! Then words….like little harness bells tingling Fall in line, line after line! Drawing nourishment, the embryo grows limb by limb The miniscule of insight, grown after months of waiting, Into a mature body of illumination! A stretch of your dreams! A suffusion of light! After the labor pains of scribbling and scrawling, Writing and rewriting, deleting, adding and editing, With time stretching and contracting, A baby, nay, a poem is born…… August.4.2022 ~Placed Seventh~ Simile Poetry Contest Sponsor- Hilo Poet
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La France Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 3:47 PM
Valsa, beautifully penned poem and congratulations on your win in the contest, blessings ~Constance
Kauffman Avatar
August 16, 2022 at 9:59 AM
Wonderful metaphoric write Valsa comparing the birth of a poem to the pregnancy and birth of a baby. Ultimate creativity - so relatable to any woman who has had children. Congratulations on your win my friend. Blessings for all of your poetic "babies" to come.
Alex Avatar
August 15, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Poetic work is beautifully compared with a baby's birth. Great narration. Beautiful flow. Figures of speeches are generously used. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
August 14, 2022 at 2:01 PM
Congratulations on your win. A "Creative/Wonderful" write. I have said this for many years. It is so true, writing and giving can be the same. Have a blessed day writing away...............
Poteet Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 6:55 PM
Who was that famous guy who recently said, "I wish we men could birth babies and feel new life forming inside us." He would enjoy your poem...most exceleent Valsa.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 2:30 PM
“A stretch of your dreams! A suffusion of light!” Gorgeous writing my friend. Congratulations on this creative beautiful poem being on the premiere contest winning list Valsa. Blessings xxoo
Fowler Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 10:45 AM
Perfect Valsa. Crafted and expressed so well! "Then words….like little harness bells tingling Fall in line, line after line!" Love it! Congratulations on your win! Linda
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 9:34 AM
Professional craftsmanship, Valsa, breathes true my friend! Thanks for your participation and my compliments on your high placement in my contest, Aloha~William
George Avatar
August 13, 2022 at 7:51 PM
Thanks a lot dear William ! Feel so happy about my win. Thank you for placing my poem in the winner's list. Also thanks for the lovely comment !
Poet Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 3:31 PM
Valsa, the analogy you've created is really fantastic since it's so detailed. Your metaphors and diction are excellent.
Baker Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 4:47 PM
Nice Simile poem for the contest, Valsa. Good choice for your comparison to writing a poem. I enjoyed your effort. Good luck in the contest! Bill
George Avatar
August 6, 2022 at 9:32 AM
Thanks a lot dear Bill for your lovely response to my poem and your Best wishes ! Stay blessed, dear friend .....
Buhagiar Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 2:25 AM
Your metaphors excel. So great comparisons. Hugs.
George Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 2:28 AM
Thank you so much Victor !
Wolf Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 6:34 PM
Only one question after reading your fine poem, Valsa: How do men give birth to a poem? ... Oh, excuse me! I forgot. The Congress of the U.S. has discussed this question. Many Democrat representatives tell us that men CAN give birth. Pardon my naivete. ~ Keep smiling, gw
George Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 10:00 PM
Oh.... I didn't think of it ! Howevr you raised the question and you have answered it ! Glad, my job is over....! Thanks a lot Gershon for your witty comment !
Martin Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 2:31 PM
A wonderful poem, Valsa, Loved it all but the last stanza was the clincher. Beautiful allegory. Bravo "Baby"!
George Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 2:21 AM
Thanks a lot Terrel ! Glad I got acquainted with your poetry !
Canerdy Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 2:09 PM
Valsa, this vividly decriptive comparison is nothing short of a masterpiece! Janice
George Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 2:23 AM
Wow... feel so delighted by this comment ! Thanks a lot dear friend , Janice!
Brul Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 10:00 AM
Brilliantly articulated with grace. I agree from first to last line. A FAV for me.
George Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 9:58 PM
Thank you so much Jez. Glad to see you back after a long period of staying away ! Thanks a lot !I feel honored that you have made this a Fave of yours.
Pandit Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 6:58 AM
A birth of baby--a birth of poem. To a poet both are precious. Well done Vala, apt for the contest theme . Best to you.
George Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 2:25 AM
Yes, indeed ! Both come to us after much effort ! Yet the joy that comes later is ample reward ! Thanks a lot Vijay !
Cunningham Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 3:25 AM
Great use of metaphors Valsa and good luck in the contest. Hope your week is going well Tom
George Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 2:26 AM
Thanks a lot dear Tom ! Have a great weekend !
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