Lighting the Tree Premiere Contest Winner

My Christmas lights emerged a tangle
They twisted and turned at an angle
	toes caught the middle
	caused me to piddle
The shock caused my jingle to jangle

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Date: 12/25/2022 2:54:00 PM
Delightful ~ Happy Holidays, Linda ~
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/25/2022 4:22:00 PM
Thank you Line. All season's blessings now and through the new year! :)
Date: 12/8/2022 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations, Linda!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/8/2022 4:59:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Linda
Date: 12/5/2022 5:00:00 PM
So original! Laughter a plenty! Such excellent creativity here in your jolly-holly limerick. Lines that infuse festivity for the holiday season. Congratulations! Brian
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/6/2022 7:50:00 AM
I'm really glad you got some laughs from this limerick Brian. :)) I appreciate your visit and comments!
Date: 12/4/2022 2:31:00 PM
That is REALLY good. Congrats, Linda
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 5:18:00 PM
Ha! Thanks Andrea. I appreciate your comments. :)
Date: 12/4/2022 10:58:00 AM
Ouch! I don’t think my jingle ever jangled. I bet that smarts! Congrats on your top spot win, Linda. Terry
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 11:07:00 AM
You are a lucky man if your jingle never jangled, at least from a shock - ouch! is right! Thanks for stopping by Terry. I always appreciate your visits. :)
Date: 12/4/2022 10:00:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... making me chuckle. God bless you.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:26:00 AM
Hello Beata. Nice to see you here. :) Thanks for the visit and chuckle. Blessings for the Christmas season! :)
Date: 12/4/2022 9:31:00 AM
Back again to congratulate you on such a well deserved win Linda. I laughed again out loud when I just read it again
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:25:00 AM
Many thanks Wendy. A cheer-you-up limerick for sure. :)
Date: 12/3/2022 10:46:00 PM
What funny fandangle - congrats
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:25:00 AM
Thank you for the fandango and congrats Sean!
Date: 12/3/2022 4:35:00 PM
Hahaha! Your limerick is such fun stuff, Linda! Hilarious imagery. Congratulations for your awesome trophy win in Tania’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/7/2022 5:56:00 AM
Hi Susan - thanks for the laughter and congratulations! I appreciate your positive comments. :)
Date: 12/3/2022 3:32:00 PM
Congratulations on your Trophy win, Linda! Superb! Enjoyed so much!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/7/2022 5:55:00 AM
Hello Mala. Thank you for your kind words and congrats. I'm glad you enjoyed this one. :)
Date: 12/3/2022 3:28:00 PM
Wow--tell me again, how did you get that shock? :) Great limerick! Congrats on First!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/7/2022 5:54:00 AM
Thank you Ann! I appreciate your comments and congrats. :)
Date: 12/3/2022 3:23:00 PM
Linda, congratulations on your first place trophy win, this is hilarious and made me laugh!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:24:00 AM
Thank you Tania! A wonderful placement for me :) I'm glad you laughed! :)
Date: 12/2/2022 3:22:00 PM
Lol, I can't stop! I've been laughing all day, Linda, I really enjoyed yours, you got me at toes! BOL
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 12/4/2022 10:23:00 AM
Ha! Glad you got some laughs from this one. :)
Date: 11/30/2022 5:45:00 AM
Whoa!! But also, ha!! ha!!..Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit to my page with congratulations. Sara
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/30/2022 6:18:00 AM
Hi Sara, glad you enjoyed the read and got a smile or two. Thanks for visiting! :)
Date: 11/29/2022 7:29:00 PM
It makes me chuckle. Too much laughing, I fear, may cause me to 'piddle'. Great one Linda !
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/30/2022 6:17:00 AM
Glad you got a chuckle Valsa. There is never too much laughing, even though the consequences may be embarrassing. LOL Thanks for the visit! :)
Date: 11/29/2022 10:31:00 AM
lol funny!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/29/2022 10:53:00 AM
Hey Kim! Thanks for the visit. Glad you got a laugh :)
Date: 11/29/2022 5:33:00 AM
Great funny limerick. Great play with words.
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/29/2022 7:29:00 AM
Good morning my friend Victor. Thanks for stopping by and commenting! hugs :)
Date: 11/28/2022 6:47:00 PM
I am reminded of some of the funny things on Christmas prep. A fun write couldn't stop laughing. Great piece simple and graceful. Jingle your jangle.....lol
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/29/2022 7:29:00 AM
Hello Weston. Happy to see you here. Thanks for coming by and laughing with me! :)
Date: 11/28/2022 6:12:00 PM
LOL LOL LOL Wonderful Linda. This nearly caused me to "piddle" Very funny,
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/29/2022 7:28:00 AM
Heehee! Glad you enjoyed this one Wendy! :)
Date: 11/28/2022 6:04:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your humorous well-written Limerick, Linda. I wish it was fiction though. Regards
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 11/29/2022 7:28:00 AM
It is fiction Lasaad, except for the tangled lights LOL! Thanks for reading and commenting :)
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