Light My Path

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stunning in the dark light up my path slip and fall you sparkle in gloom follow your light as you stand fight till the firefly brings forth 1st PLACE CONTEST WINNER Magical Spell Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 4/23/2022 4:15:00 AM

Hello once again Scotto. I turned to this entry because of its marvelous title. Always must there be light in everything. Your entry is wonderful poetry and imagery. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Enjoy the weekend and poetrysoup as well. Take care

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2022 10:20:00 PM

I enjoyed your poem. I think the picture is a dragonfly but they are really cool too.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 3/17/2022 4:47:00 AM

"follow your light as you stand" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/16/2022 10:43:00 AM

Lasaad, congratulations on your win. This poem has a marvelous depth to it. It does "sparkle" and twinkle lighting up the winners list! Blessings my friend and all the best as you walk your evening path!

Valsa George

Date: 3/16/2022 9:03:00 AM

Once again with congratulations on your great win dear Lasaad !

Valsa George

Date: 3/14/2022 9:09:00 PM

Your tanka has a magical glow about it ! It shimmers in darkness !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2022 5:57:00 PM

Great photo and lovely write, Lasaad--sparkles in the dark.