Lifetime with a Call Girl

Truly unruly was she, but he loved her. Changing the mange of a call girl might burn Jude. Barb accepted diamond bling-ring with a purr. This bombshell morsel, would trick him - he’d be screwed, As this fox sought payment to become his wife. She’d even take double for days without strife. Without thought, he’d give in to his blackmailer, Like a siren calls to a cockcrow sailor.
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Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 12:59 PM
The ending is most fitting. He is just like a sailor at the mercy of a siren.
Wolf Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 7:08 PM
Ha, ha. Between Scylla and Charybidis, there's not much room to maneuver. ~ gw
Rodrigues Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 5:33 AM
Thanks for teaching me the lesson of choosing between two evils. I had not heard of Scylla and Charybdis. Teaching an old dog new tricks…well I’m older, at best, and definately not a dog. Blessings, my friend Gershon!
One Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 12:25 PM
You have a vivid imagination... this is an interesting one to use with this form.. which you did really well..
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 1:29 PM
Thank you, Silent!
George Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 8:44 PM
Love is too blind sometimes! Mismatched people when coming together in marriage, will end up in gutters. Let us wait and see how it is going to end up. However, it arouses our curiosity. The very title sparked an amount of suspense and wonder!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 3, 2024 at 11:02 AM
Thank you, Valsa! Glad you liked the title too :)
Baker Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:30 PM
Engaging poetry, Kim. You paint the picture well with your poetic words. We live in a world where those that try to help are often treated worse than the ones they try to help, by the very people they help. Intriguing poem, my friend. Bill
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:28 PM
Glad you found my poem engaging & intriguing and love that you pondered it according to the world we live in. Thank you, Bill!
Pandit Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 2:28 PM
Love knows no bounds--if they were happy, that's all that matters. A unique poem, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:02 PM
Thank you, Vijay! :)
Jones Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 1:54 PM
Wow! This one was an attention grabber from the title on. Love that third line! Purrrrrrrr lol.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 5:03 PM
LOL! Thank you, Karen!
Beaufort Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 1:49 PM
Kim, we've probably all seen relationships like this. Funny how you say he'd be screwed. It's always interesting to get to know people and see if we can figure out what holds a pair together. You're prompting me to analyze more couples (lol). I am not envious of guys married to a "bombshell." There's a lot more to life. Of course if one loves the package, it can work no matter what. Hope Jude was happy for a long time, but I wonder.
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 7:34 PM
LOL, that you are now analyzing more couples. I find myself doing that. My mom and dad had a love that doesn’t compare to most, but still everyone has their unique way of sharing a marriage for better or worse. Here we don’t find the outcome. ;)
Rodgers Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 12:24 PM
Dear Kim, Wow your poem delves into the complexities of love, trust, and vulnerability. Through great imagery and poignant language, you explore the tumultuous relationship between Jude and the call girl. The juxtaposition of love and manipulation creates a powerful narrative, highlighting the often blurred lines between desire and deceit. Kim you skillfully capture the essence of human emotions and the challenges of navigating relationships in a world of temptation and betrayal. - Blessings, Daniel
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 12:48 PM
Thank you, Daniel, for your in-depth analysis on my poem. I appreciate you. Blessings!
Andresen Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 11:42 AM
- a fun write, Kim :) - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
March 2, 2024 at 12:43 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
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