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Life With All the Colors

They were formidable, taking charge of my life With a link of tenuous trust in anything or anyone Leaving my heart brittle, but my spirit is immutable So, I took a stand and stood by truth with courage I faced my life with all the colors within the scene Replacing pain with beautiful sketch paintings to see In my interlude, I accepted I will always be bereft Of unconditional love from those once closest to me A family who fought me, as I learned to distance myself --- To reply demurely – if at all --- 11/3/17 Placed 5th in the 8 Word challenge-5 Contest.

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Date: 11/4/2017 11:33:00 AM
Really well done Heidi, congrats on a fine placement!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 11:44:00 AM
Thank you very much John :)
Date: 11/4/2017 10:23:00 AM
Congrats on your win Heidi
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thank you :)
Date: 11/4/2017 9:28:00 AM
A joy to see you win--congrats Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Vijay, I didn't even realize I had won lol. I appreciate your comment!
Date: 11/4/2017 8:49:00 AM
Well done and congrats to you, Heidi.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 9:19:00 AM
Hi Lin. Thank you :)
Date: 11/4/2017 5:56:00 AM
What a fabulous write! I surely loved how you have written this incredible poem, with such skill that I'm left in awe of its splendor! I doubt I could have written such a wonderful piece such as this one with as few lines as you have written it in! I would have to write so many lines to get all the words in that make sense to me, but you have done so with seeming ease and with very few lines...I'm impressed! What a remarkable poem, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/4/2017 7:00:00 AM
Thank you Russell :)
Date: 11/3/2017 3:38:00 PM
You used the words well in this emotive write Heidi..best wishes
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/3/2017 4:45:00 PM
Thank you Joseph :)
Date: 11/3/2017 1:37:00 PM
Feel the emotions in this poem--all the colors well depicted--best for a win, Heidi!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 11/3/2017 1:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Vijay :)

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