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Life is a Song

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*Written using 25 Beatles hit song titles. Revised a bit for 2024 It's been a hard day's night, my love. Tonight, I want to hold your hand and keep you close. Beloved one please, love me, do, for though I'm tired I feel fine. And here's a rose I bought on the way home, from me to you. I'll admit, there's been times I've doubted you. George keeps telling me, "She loves you man, it's evident in the way she looks at you." Yet, like some delusional day tripper, I sometimes feel as though I should just let it be and move on. Oh, I've tried my best to woo you with expensive gifts. In the end, I found this to be true - money can't buy me love. Even still, if I could work eight days a week I'd do what I could to give you what you truly deserve, the best of everything. Sometimes I feel I should just quit this mundane job of mine, maybe become a paperback writer, or perhaps make a living by the sea, sailing to the ocean depths in a yellow submarine. Yet, how could I abandon my love? I've always believed that we can work it out. And I truly feel that all you need is love. It's all that any of us really need in this vain life. Whenever I was tempted to leave and pursue my own selfish ambitions a voice in my head would whisper, 'turn around, get back to where you belong dude and stay put.' Oh dearest one, my lady Madonna, my sweet diva, it seems like only yesterday we walked down the aisle as man and wife. We bought our first little house on a street called Penny lane, do you remember? So many years ago, yet still as fresh in my mind as this morning's news. Yet, something keeps nagging at me, I can't explain it. Like a character in a Beatle's song, yeah, like Eleanor Rigby, I sometimes get down and depressed. Perhaps one day my emotions will gel and it will all come together for me. Ha! Listen to this. During the morning commute, after I bought my ticket to ride, a funny thing happened. I said hello to a gentleman and he said, "goodbye." I replied, "Excuse me sir, I said hello." Again he said, "goodbye." So, there we were back and forth with hello, goodbye, hello, goodbye. All the while the song that was playing in the background was the ballad of John and Yoko. Talk about surreal. But I digress, my love. I think that when all is said and done, relationships just need a little help every now and then. Hey Jude, my bride, the former Judith Woodshire but for two score and six, my Jude, please know this; I will love you with all I am, now and forevermore. And though our journey in life is likely to be a long and winding road, I want to walk it with you. Please, accept this rose as a token of my love, from here and to all eternity.

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Date: 6/1/2025 6:23:00 PM
Nice job Tom. It almost feels like these are in somewhat chronological order!
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/2/2025 5:56:00 AM
Much thx David
Date: 5/30/2025 8:40:00 AM
Very clever how you incorporated all those memorable song titles into a story. Great storytelling, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 5/30/2025 12:22:00 PM
Thx for checking out this deep cut
Date: 3/8/2025 5:44:00 AM
P.S I Love this. Fun poem, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/8/2025 5:50:00 AM
Hey thx much
Date: 3/8/2025 4:09:00 AM
Dropping by to say congratulations on your winning work. So nice to see it in the winners' list. Way to go. Sara
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/8/2025 5:51:00 AM
Yes'm. Thx
Date: 3/5/2025 11:53:00 PM
Well done Tom, that's a Fab Four, Octopus Garden of a Please Please Me poem. Best Regards :) M
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/6/2025 5:18:00 AM
Hey thx much
Date: 3/5/2025 3:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your tippy top win, Tommy! oh my I'm sounding a lot like you, ha. Enjoy your evening! ~Anaya
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/5/2025 4:41:00 PM
Oh gosh golly is there a cash prize? Jus kidding. Thx
Date: 3/5/2025 3:47:00 PM
Well done in my contest Tom. Like the way you incorporated The Beatles lyrics into your poem.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/5/2025 4:41:00 PM
Yessir Mr Ollie sir much thx
Date: 1/10/2025 2:58:00 PM
Oh, I love this! My husband and I listened to it together, how beautiful how you wove all those titles from the Beatles into your precious narrative so elegantly. Thank you for suggesting that I come over and listen to this awesome poem, you have a very good voice. Now my mind is filled with those wonderful songs playing chase in my mind! Gosh I love the Beatles. I am blessed by your work and this poem, thank you!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/10/2025 3:14:00 PM
Thx for checking it out. The narration is older and doesn't match perfectly with this edited version but the gist is the same. Have a pleasant evening you two!
Date: 11/20/2024 8:30:00 PM
Your story runs so smooth like a level road, well aligned and with no bumps, though you have used 25 song titles. No one feels an interpolation. What you have described here are the natural feelings of a man who is eager to please his wife. You have raised this narration to the level of a heart stirring romantic story.
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Tom Woody
Date: 11/21/2024 5:34:00 AM
Hey thx for the deep dive into my catalog and encouraging comment Valsa
Date: 7/10/2024 8:07:00 AM
Omg Tom...a new favorite!! You could be a voice actor, audio book actor... hey you know what? You could be a poet!! ;) This was so well thought out and put together. A lot of time and effort went into this I'm sure. And it's magic when you add your voice, your dramatic reading. I love how well it all meshed, not at all forced to get in all those Beatles songs... it made sense and was a great story to boot. The music in the back ground pure genius! 11 it of 10 stars for me! Xo
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/10/2024 10:26:00 AM
I never saw it but I'm aware of it. Won some awards as I recall. Fans in WVA? No way! When's the next barbecue? Hey thanks for accepting my invite. Alot of poets (even very famous ones) can bore you to tears when they do their reads. The key is let the subject matter dictate your delivery, then just go for it!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/10/2024 8:23:00 AM
...Set in Paris during the Belle Époque at the turn of the 20th century, specifically in 1899. The story takes place in the Montmartre Quarter, where the Moulin Rouge was a popular cabaret for artists and poets. In the scene the romantic leads sing a medoly of love songs.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/10/2024 8:21:00 AM
Not sure why but this reminds me of a fav scene in a movie..".Moulin Rouge". (spelling?) Is a movie musical from early 2000s or late 1990s that used contemporary popular music to tell the story....
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/10/2024 8:14:00 AM
I hope it's okay with you that I share a lot of your poetry with my family and friends. You have fans a plenty in WV!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 7/10/2024 8:12:00 AM
When and what did you win with this Tom...Either I missed it or it was before my time on ps...
Date: 7/5/2024 10:27:00 AM
Your style of writing is amazing...This is pure talent????
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/5/2024 10:32:00 AM
Hey thx much!
Date: 3/13/2024 8:17:00 PM
Wow so clever. Brilliant. I go to Liverpool where they came from as much as I can. Seen the Cavern club. I wonder what they have said about this?. Pete.
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Tom Woody
Date: 7/5/2024 10:33:00 AM
Hey Peter hopefully they'd give me at least one star
Date: 3/9/2024 10:33:00 AM
You do this sort of thing very well, Tom...and thanks for the memories.
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Tom Woody
Date: 3/9/2024 12:42:00 PM
Much thx
Date: 2/2/2024 11:14:00 PM
Wonderful write! Belated congratulations
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/3/2024 5:50:00 AM
Much thx karen
Date: 2/2/2024 5:14:00 PM
Dear Tom, I admire your use of Beatles song titles in your romantic narrative. The pacing of the titles was perfect and worked so well within the scheme of your fun and creative poem. A wonderful introspection and love story. Lots of memories in these titles.. Warmest wishes.. ~Suze
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/3/2024 5:50:00 AM
This isn't one of my faves but the narration worked well, I think. Much appreciated
Date: 2/2/2024 11:00:00 AM
WoW..I love.this from beginning to end..and So nice to put a voice to your writing..Lovely & Romantic...I love The Beatles.
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Tom Woody
Date: 2/2/2024 2:37:00 PM
Thx for commenting again :)
Date: 1/23/2024 12:32:00 AM
My Carrying A Torch is about Van the Man but I like the soothing sound of your Beatles. I wonder did those guys watch The Klingons?
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/26/2024 1:51:00 PM
Indubitably
Date: 1/20/2024 11:32:00 AM
Tom Tom. Hi. Your execution in its entirety incorporating music and songs is marvelous and always a great exercise. It was your execution that puts everything together in poetic fashion. I very much enjoyed your title to which life is a song at that. Be very proud of your work before us. And yes, what a great touch that you recorded this which makes it an added bonus to your readers. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful weekend. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/20/2024 1:00:00 PM
Much appreciated u visiting my space Lisa
Date: 1/19/2024 10:33:00 AM
What a fun tribute to the Beatles all wrapped up in a romantic story! Hope she took your rose! Very creative and clever, Tom. Blessings!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/19/2024 3:33:00 PM
Thx Sammi
Date: 1/15/2024 7:45:00 AM
Wow that's a very creative write with so many Beatles' song titles.. you are so good at story-telling and making it flow so well!
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Ayesha Iqbal
Date: 1/16/2024 2:52:00 AM
Thanks.. always a pleasure to read your work Tom!
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/15/2024 3:01:00 PM
Hello Ayesha. Good to see ya
Date: 1/15/2024 5:48:00 AM
Brings back a lot of memories. This was very well done Tom. I also enjoyed the tongue and cheek narration. This is so much fun.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/15/2024 5:49:00 AM
Hey thx Rick
Date: 1/14/2024 7:51:00 PM
Oh wow, this is absolutely a creative write and I really love how you've included The Beatles songs ahhh, that made it such an intriguing read..Painted such a musical ambience throughout these words and I'm in awe of how ingeniously you thought of this artistic idea..I can almost hear this narrative in my mind, with songs playing and instances unfolding..From beginning to finish, this was truly so beautiful to read, with emotions and storyline, everything well aligned! Congratulations on the win
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Date: 1/14/2024 6:58:00 PM
I love the way you've put a voice to your poem,a very soothing voice.I am a Beatles' fan so I loved this, and found it very sweet.Lovelt,just lovely, Tom.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/14/2024 7:03:00 PM
Yes, my real voice. Thx much Charmaine
Date: 1/13/2024 6:34:00 PM
Wonderful write,Tommy, the voice made it nicer to enjoy.
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 8:22:00 PM
Hey glad you listened in. Thx
Date: 1/13/2024 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win! Beatle Mania. "Thank you, John" --as Yoko would say! Have a nice day
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Tom Woody
Date: 1/13/2024 11:54:00 AM
Not a win but happy to be included. Thx
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