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Life in Spring

a
lovely
dragonfly
hovers over
a fragrant lotus,
that grows in the floodplains.
The dragonfly sniffs the spice
that emanates from the lotus,
darts here and there in search of nectar.
A  frog attacks,  the dragonfly escapes.

Copyright © Victor Buhagiar | Year Posted 2024

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Silpika Kalita Date: 3/17/2024 7:03:00 AM A realistic visualisation penning with the amalgamation of web chain and ecological balance. Login to Reply

Christina Bowring Date: 3/9/2024 11:59:00 PM Such a lovely, well described poem dear Victor. The reader can so easily visualise the hovering dragonfly and its narrowly evaded demise. Love the creativity here and the title too. So happy that the little dragonfly escaped! A delightful spring read from your immensely talented pen. Blessings dear Victor for a peaceful Sunday :) Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 3/8/2024 2:38:00 AM Congratulations on your winner in Tania's contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it with us. Sara K Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/4/2024 9:52:00 AM I love this fun image of Spring Victor. Congratulations! hugs :) Login to Reply

Paula Goldsmith Date: 3/4/2024 9:17:00 AM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely Spring Etheree write. What a beautiful/colorful spring dragonfly/flower picture. Spring will be here very soon.... Have a wonderful day/week writing away......... Login to Reply

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 3/4/2024 8:38:00 AM I love this fun image of Spring Victor. Congratulations! hugs :) Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 3/3/2024 12:54:00 PM Victor, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful poem! Login to Reply

I Am Anaya Date: 3/3/2024 12:05:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Victor! Spring is here! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 2/28/2024 10:38:00 PM Great Etheree, love the imagery and feeling of the poem. Hugs my friend.. P.S. I go in at 6am friday, it will take an hour and a half. Login to Reply

Bj Legros Kelley Date: 2/27/2024 11:18:00 PM I am happy that the dragonfly escaped :) We had a dragonfly in our house yesterday, way up on the vaulted ceiling. I thought it may be a scorpion because they look similar from a distance like that. We just had construction done and thought the workers accidently brought it in on their tools. Happily my husband's eyes are better than mine, he could see its wings. He carefully shood it from the ceiling with a broom and safely out the door. Dragonflies are so sweet, and so is your poem. Loved it! Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 2/27/2024 2:21:00 PM I enjoyed this. Great, the dragonfly escapes the attack too. Well done. :) Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/26/2024 11:08:00 AM - A beautiful about spring events, Victor :) - hugs Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/25/2024 5:47:00 PM Charming etheree, my friend. Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 2/25/2024 11:04:00 AM You seem to know human nature very well, and your keen observant ways help with your great poetry thanks for sharing this, have a blessed Sunday Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/25/2024 10:43:00 AM I'm so glad the dragon fly escaped. A BEAUTIFUL Etheree, and the pic is marvelous. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Paige Hind Date: 2/25/2024 10:23:00 AM Very interesting title that goes with your poem- I'm glad to dragonfly got away ;) Login to Reply

Regina Mcintosh Date: 2/25/2024 5:58:00 AM Wonderful writing, Victor. Love it. God bless you kind soul. love, Gina Login to Reply

Ink Empress Date: 2/25/2024 12:12:00 AM Wow what a gorgeous and unique etheree! I absolutely loved this. So very much! I can see through your words a dragonfly hovering over a fragrant lotus! So gorgeous! And how cute a frog attacks and dragonfly escapes! Clever and creative one! I enjoyed reading this. Bol for the contest Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 2/24/2024 9:58:00 PM Your world is populated with the beauty and small wonders of nature. The trio, the dragonfly, the lotus, and the frog form a lovely nexus. Beautiful Etheree, dear Victor! Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/24/2024 5:42:00 PM Action, drama and beauty, too! This short, but sweet poem has it all, Victor. :) Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 2/24/2024 5:00:00 PM Done, by a poet who sees beauty in God’s universe. Thank you for so doing. Thank you for seeing this and sharing lovely thoughts about it,Victor. Panagiota Login to Reply

Hilda Greenhough Date: 2/24/2024 12:45:00 PM I breathe a sigh of relief. I'm glad the dragonfly escaped. Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 2/24/2024 10:44:00 AM Wonderful write, my friend, Victor. Enchanting imagery -- I saw it all in the moment. Live, firsthand action. Living words! This is a FAV for me! Login to Reply

Bill Baker Date: 2/24/2024 10:19:00 AM A fine Etheree poem, Victor. The "pond wars, are back. :-) The pic matched the poem perfectly, my friend. Have a nice day! Bill Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 2/24/2024 10:08:00 AM An interesting capture of spring... I dont think a dragon fly would be very each to catch.. nicely done.. Login to Reply

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