Let's Rhyme

Over verdant foothills, I often climb.
Through orchards of fragrant lemon and lime.
where the frosty air has a cooler clime
and valley views are stunningly sublime.

I hear church bells ringing. Their echoes chime,
calling me to write lyrics like Sondheim.
Every melody filled with words that rhyme
and those who can't sing, mouthed in pantomime.

Autumn's golden landscape is in its prime.
Seasonal changes are a paradigm.
Soon, snow will be falling and that's what I'm
waiting for; the beauty of wintertime.

On my way home, I'll stop and pick wild thyme.
I wouldn't think that's considered a crime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kulkarni Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 1:46 PM
Very cute poem! I enjoyed reading it!! The flow is really nice too Lin!
Horn Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 6:49 AM
How about a bourbon ball and a beautiful doll and small Jesus laying in a stall while we buy presents in a shopping mall? Do have a happy poem writing day. Hush hush sweet Sara and you must be good friends.
George Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 10:15 PM
Excellently painted scene, Lin ! Love the opening stanza. As a child I enjoyed climbing hills and viewed with wonder the scenes around. Very creative monorhyme, dear friend.
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:38 AM
It’s an exhilarating emotion. Thank you, Valsa.
Narain Avatar
November 30, 2023 at 9:48 AM
Nicely penned Monorhyme.
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:38 AM
Thank you, Jay.
Goldsmith Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 7:34 PM
WOW!!! A creative Monorhyme write/great ending. Love this one... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:37 AM
You’re always leaving wonderful remarks for me, Paula. I value each one. Thank You.
Connelly Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 3:51 PM
You've done it again Lin: Written a wonderful monorhyme!!! I smiled at the mouthing in pantomime line. I really like this form of poetry; and you do it well. Thanks for this
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:36 AM
I needed one more rhyming word and didn’t want to use grime or slime. Thanks a bunch, Jeff.
Cunningham Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 12:46 PM
You rhymed well Lin, found that form a bit tricky to compose. You make it look easy. Good luck. Tom
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:34 AM
It’s a bit of a challenge but fun for me. I hope you’re staple free by now, Tom.
Turner Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 12:37 PM
Nicely penned, Lin. Lots of great images in a very tough form.
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:33 AM
For a reader to see a scene through my eyes is a fine compliment. Thank you. Danny.
Greenhough Avatar
November 29, 2023 at 12:25 PM
Wild thyme sounds interesting. This was a lovely free-spirited poem.
Lane Avatar
December 1, 2023 at 4:32 AM
Thanks a lot, Hilda.
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