Let Us Dream

Cerulean sky, a dove with an Olive branch; no marchpast below, no guns,armymen waiting patiently to receive it. ===================== Placement: 13th (May 2011) By:kashinath karmakar Contest:Short Poem Contest Sponsor:Judy Konos By:kashinath karmakar(28th Feb.2011)

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Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/14/2011 5:02:00 PM

I think this was the one you wanted me to read & YES it is more MY sentiment too..please remember tanka is from the same TREE as haiku there fore all the same rules apply re punctuation cap's and titles..light & love to you who watch over me ;)

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 11:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Judy's contest Kashinath. Love,Carol

Emma Buckeridge

Date: 5/13/2011 6:55:00 AM

A truly deserving win, many congrats to you, Emma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/12/2011 10:18:00 AM

Excellent poem, Kash! Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/12/2011 7:24:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of judy, kashinath

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2011 8:16:00 PM

WAY TO GO, my friend!!! Congratulations on this deserved win!!

Judy Konos

Date: 5/11/2011 7:04:00 PM

Thank you for being in my contest

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2011 4:10:00 PM

Congrats Kash on another super win today in the Short Poem contest my friend.. another great write and entry .. magnificent one.. enjoy with luv..

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 5/11/2011 2:57:00 PM

Very good. Congrats

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/1/2011 3:46:00 PM

Very creative and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this eve..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2011 9:03:00 PM

A most beautiful dream, kashinath! You are using some great vocabulary words too! good night. I am going to get off now!

Elaine George

Date: 2/28/2011 2:49:00 PM

yes! Let us dream, for dreams sometimes do come true. Beautiful thoughts, dear Kashinath. Lainie

Poet Tacito

Date: 2/28/2011 10:28:00 AM

Holy damn this was stunning...nice job.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 2/28/2011 10:03:00 AM

a gem of a piece that honors harmony, kashi... just amazing!:) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 2/28/2011 8:32:00 AM

Beautiful thoughts eager to come to pass Kashinath in this lifetime.. such peace would be fantastic to behold.. luv your Cerulean sky my friend. .. warm and wondrous ..luv..