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Let My Touch Flourish

Relinquish breath as we reach our s t e e p peak. Let's bathe within our vessels deep inside and LET our minds forget to see or speak- I love you 'neath our sheltered harbor tide. R e l e a s e your soft desire as I'm gaping, but gently, please, MY body's so tender- A light scent, my passion is escaping, deep in the core of pure delight's splendor. Before night's dusk, I w i t h e r e d in pains life, yet when I felt loves TOUCH I did awake- For you believed I'd be a true mates wife, your p r e c i o u s heart you promised me to take. B l e s s e d be us with soft dreams that render- may our love FLOURISH in sweet s u r r e n d e r. Ten syllables in each line: *BLESSED* can be 1 or 2 syllables, I used it as 2 Date Written: August 8, 2016

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Date: 9/24/2016 3:01:00 PM
So sensual and romantic, Laura Loo
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Date: 9/24/2016 2:31:00 PM
Laura,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 9/24/2016 11:02:00 AM
Lovely, congratulations LuLoo...
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Date: 9/19/2016 11:04:00 AM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest.
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Date: 9/14/2016 12:41:00 PM
Laura, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this b e a u t i f u l poem~
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Date: 9/13/2016 5:32:00 PM
Back to say congrats on your win, second time round works better it seems!
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Date: 9/13/2016 5:09:00 PM
Very romantic LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/12/2016 1:26:00 AM
Tenderly Romantic, Laura:) All the best:) I stay away from sonnets...
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/16/2016 9:49:00 PM
thank you Jo, I have no problems with sonnets but when it comes to pentameter I struggle very much. I needed assistance from a fellow poetess for this poem. I'm hoping it works for what Becca is expecting! You should try a sonnet Jo, I'm sure it would be great :)-luloo
Date: 8/9/2016 10:12:00 AM
loved it, good luck in the contest. Always good reading.
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2016 11:42:00 AM
thank you sweet Ronald :)-luloo
Date: 8/9/2016 10:07:00 AM
This is very, very good Laura should do well in the contest!
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/9/2016 11:41:00 AM
thank you dear John :)-luloo

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