Let My Touch Flourish

Relinquish breath as we reach our s t e e p peak. Let's bathe within our vessels deep inside and LET our minds forget to see or speak- I love you 'neath our sheltered harbor tide. R e l e a s e your soft desire as I'm gaping, but gently, please, MY body's so tender- A light scent, my passion is escaping, deep in the core of pure delight's splendor. Before night's dusk, I w i t h e r e d in pains life, yet when I felt loves TOUCH I did awake- For you believed I'd be a true mates wife, your p r e c i o u s heart you promised me to take. B l e s s e d be us with soft dreams that render- may our love FLOURISH in sweet s u r r e n d e r. Ten syllables in each line: *BLESSED* can be 1 or 2 syllables, I used it as 2 Date Written: August 8, 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Leiser Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 3:01 PM
So sensual and romantic, Laura Loo
Roper Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 2:31 PM
Laura,congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Smith Avatar
September 24, 2016 at 11:02 AM
Lovely, congratulations LuLoo...
Negron Flores Avatar
September 19, 2016 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations Laura on the placement of the contest.
La France Avatar
September 14, 2016 at 12:41 PM
Laura, CONGRATULATIONS on your win in my contest with this b e a u t i f u l poem~
Hamilton Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:32 PM
Back to say congrats on your win, second time round works better it seems!
Allison Avatar
September 13, 2016 at 5:09 PM
Very romantic LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Daniel Avatar
August 12, 2016 at 1:26 AM
Tenderly Romantic, Laura:) All the best:) I stay away from sonnets...
Scars Avatar
August 16, 2016 at 9:49 PM
thank you Jo, I have no problems with sonnets but when it comes to pentameter I struggle very much. I needed assistance from a fellow poetess for this poem. I'm hoping it works for what Becca is expecting! You should try a sonnet Jo, I'm sure it would be great :)-luloo
Kent Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 10:12 AM
loved it, good luck in the contest. Always good reading.
Scars Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 11:42 AM
thank you sweet Ronald :)-luloo
Hamilton Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 10:07 AM
This is very, very good Laura should do well in the contest!
Scars Avatar
August 9, 2016 at 11:41 AM
thank you dear John :)-luloo
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace