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Let Me Get Romantic

Let me get r o m a n t i c, cross my legs, pucker my lips, slip into your shadow. You say, “It’s a bit hot in here,” as I draw near. You're pulling at your collar, releasing your tie. My scarf, silkily and seamlessly, slides onto the parquet floor, next to your shoes, kicked off. My s t i l e t o s join yours on the ballroom floor. They’re ruby red. We are not ready for bed, Mon amour. For now, we are in this for kicks. High riding our stallions through the m e a d o w. Enjoying our tricks and treats together. Our wet skin, pearlescent, in the moonlight, swimming with p l e a s u r e in the dark. We get closer and closer to the t r u t h of who she is; who he is; we’re in the depths. The mistletoe overhead reveals a mystery. You’d think it is a k i s s, but it is a knee. The d i a m o n d brilliance of cerise cheeks, and a “yes, oh yes,” and yes, comes the kiss. Let me get r o m a n t i c, in snow of negligee, looser lips, and a slip b e t w e e n the sheets. It’s never been h o t t e r as you draw near. It’s time we know no bounds, my love.

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Date: 9/22/2024 1:38:00 PM
So clever and well written Kim. From intro to proposal to answer to a slip between the sheets. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/22/2024 5:00:00 PM
Thank you, Linda!
Date: 9/19/2024 4:03:00 PM
Your title really drew me in. Loved your images such as snow of neglige. Wasn't sure what you meant by thinking a kiss is a knee. Anyway. All the rest of it was so romantic, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2024 7:16:00 PM
Sorry it wasn’t more clear. You would think being under a mistletoe she would get a mere kiss, instead she got a proposal, thus the diamond brilliance and the honeymoon heat in the final verse.
Date: 9/18/2024 3:23:00 PM
Gorgeous writing- it's so "romantic"...I loved this "We get closer and closer to the t r u t h of who she is; who he is; we’re in the depths"
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2024 10:29:00 AM
Thank you, Paige! So glad you liked those lines!
Date: 9/16/2024 9:39:00 AM
Dear Kim, Not only did I love the poem but I loved the word play and yes, it was so romantic, filled with passion and play. Quite the romanticist! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2024 12:54:00 PM
Thank you, Daniel!
Date: 9/15/2024 6:46:00 PM
Where's the nearest fire extinguisher, dear?!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/16/2024 5:56:00 AM
lol
Date: 9/15/2024 4:25:00 AM
Wow! And I thought you were prim and proper!? / Maurice
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2024 3:55:00 PM
Well, they married after the diamond ring :) Prim and proper…lol!
Date: 9/15/2024 3:18:00 AM
Oh My Goodness - this is so sensual Kim. I think I better leave you two together in the privacy to enjoy the 'Yes! Yes! Yes! that you you scream out - lol Hugs Maria
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2024 3:54:00 PM
LOL, Maria! :)
Date: 9/14/2024 8:42:00 PM
Whew hot stuff! Love this Kim!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2024 3:54:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 9/14/2024 6:41:00 PM
Hot keen romance!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/15/2024 3:54:00 PM
:)
Date: 9/13/2024 7:28:00 PM
Very steamy! Romantic indeed. I will leave you two alone. Amore is the word of the evening.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/13/2024 8:47:00 PM
LOL! :)

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