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Lamentations

lamentations~ mournful chanting song of only your flowered grace lone, I reminisce at the edge of old green pond sorrow flows on each ripple...

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Date: 10/7/2017 12:36:00 AM
Lovely write, Rick - Blessings and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend - wonderful work! :-)
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Date: 10/6/2017 7:15:00 PM
Rick, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest !
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Date: 1/1/2017 11:58:00 AM
Very pretty poem, Rick! Congratulations! ...Fran
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Date: 9/25/2016 6:57:00 PM
beautiful Rick-this is hard to compare to for your contest!! :)-luloo
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/25/2016 8:46:00 PM
Geeezzzz.... A BLESSED EVE.
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Date: 9/25/2016 8:45:00 PM
O.K. I'm on the laptop......I have one more I posted take a look see. I'm going to see how many have entered. have a Blessing eve...
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/25/2016 8:38:00 PM
Lament all you want......:-))
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/25/2016 8:36:00 PM
I didn't put ?? It was a smiley face
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Rick Parise
Date: 9/25/2016 8:35:00 PM
You Go Girl......U got this.....??

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