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Labyrinth

Labyrinthine thoughts, and limitless e n d l e s s grief- Longing, I yearn, for those LOST days of happiness . . . Loving hands r e a c h i n g out. Life fades away . . . OH, my love wait, wait in death's maze. ____________________ April 13, 2017 Pleiades Verse/Labyrinth Copyright Protected, ID 892218 Pleiades L Kim Merryman First Place

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Mark Martin

Date: 4/27/2017 3:23:00 PM

Great imagery and use of shape. Congratulations on a well deserved win BW! :-)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/22/2017 7:06:00 PM

Nicely written , Broken Wings, congratulations on your win. ~*

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/18/2017 9:41:00 PM

Constance, this was beautifully written. Your presentation really emphasized the longing being expressed. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim

John Michaels

Date: 4/18/2017 7:14:00 PM

Wow, that's an incredible piece! Congratulations on a well-deserved first place! Regards, John.

Charlie Smith

Date: 4/18/2017 3:57:00 PM

Congratulations Constance, well deserved...

Sara Chansarkar

Date: 4/18/2017 3:16:00 PM

Its beautiful Broken. congrats!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 4/18/2017 5:25:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Constance!

Roy Pett

Date: 4/18/2017 5:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win, absolutely brilliant Pleiades. :))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/18/2017 1:50:00 AM

- Congratulations on your "Pleiades L" poems, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 4/17/2017 9:46:00 PM

Very creatively crafted! Congrats on a truly deserving win!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 4/17/2017 9:28:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Constance. Love what you did with your pleiades.

Lynn Marie

Date: 4/14/2017 4:38:00 PM

Wonderfully penned, this is beautiful writing. Emotions swirling make startling imagery...so creative:) blessings xxx

The Grahamburglar

Date: 4/13/2017 9:57:00 PM

death's maze...there's an interesting metaphor. Also, I like how you s t r e t c h e d a couple of those words. When I opened the poem, the first thing I read was "endless reaching" and it pretty neatly summarized the poem. Very cool effect. I always enjoy your writing. -G

White Wolf

Date: 4/13/2017 7:16:00 PM

An excellent write here, Constance! Best of luck and have a wonderful weekend.

Sunlite Wanter

Date: 4/13/2017 6:43:00 PM

So glad to see a poem of yours tonight. I understand labyrinthine thoughts. Thanks for giving them a name for me!

Lukas Ficklin

Date: 4/13/2017 6:42:00 PM

So talented! incredible job :)