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I wonder from all the seasons, which one is me? How do nature's elements define my identity? When clouds reflect judgement, it does not matter what they think, I do not reflect what they see. I've seen petals blossom through concrete, felt the turbulent tears of Everest's crumbling peaks and I know I'm no master of destiny, but I believe in fate. As butterflies depart in the season of diversity, I see green crumble from crimson to brown - still they dance in the wind. As the earth beneath me hardens within the secret garden of my mind, weeds die, like frozen spirits. I allow erratic winds to whistle, as my soul sleeps silently, unaware of the snowstorm cold does not define me. April showers soften sleeping meadows, the fireball in the sky, hints upon his return. I ponder how nature's palette will paint her poetry upon this season's empty canvas we all fall, but we keep the faith for re-growth. The soul rejoices upon sight of the Gemini moon, blooming through the constellation of twins, adrift in tranquil warm air, under serene blue skies. Surrounded by an abundance of kaleidoscopic petals, their delicate fragrance, becomes my poetry, an expression of character and personality I ponder, maybe this is me. Silent One Simple musing 27 May 2019

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Date: 11/11/2019 3:22:00 PM
"we all fall, but we keep the faith for regrowth..." Says it all...Self doubts, self discovery - a continual journey in and out of the mystery that each person is - I love your thoughts expressed here, Silent One! Lovely and profound poetry. Warm regards, Aqua M.
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Date: 9/29/2019 5:27:00 AM
I ponder, maybe this is me// power of writings the self
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Date: 8/29/2019 8:19:00 AM
I enjoyed your contemplations.
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Date: 7/30/2019 1:15:00 PM
Your consistency makes your already wonderful craft majestic. Yet another lovely piece. This is really great..
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Date: 7/14/2019 4:50:00 AM
you unravel my mind with images that I have yet to see, bringing a new dimension of thought.
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Date: 6/30/2019 10:36:00 AM
Quite a piece full of reflective thought and emotion from you Si, good to read this today'
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Date: 6/6/2019 2:56:00 PM
Well done Jan, for Anne-Lise is beautiful, inside and out. I would rather be an old woman than an old crow.
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Date: 6/6/2019 1:18:00 PM
Hello Silent One, this is a poem with a beautiful deep meaning of life. Have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 6/6/2019 4:47:00 PM
I do think this is you. have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 6/4/2019 6:37:00 PM
I came home today to a dragonfly on my door handle. A symbol of change and life and beauty. Your words are so artful and poetic and paint such a kaleidoscope of serendipity a walk through hardness and softness interwoven. Well done SO
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Date: 6/4/2019 8:18:00 AM
As usual you know what makes a great write. Congrats on your POTW.
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:08:00 PM
Congratulations Silent One, on Poem of the Week. Thank you for being You. ~ Brandy
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:05:00 PM
Wonderful choice for POTW Si, Congratulations....Maria Hugs
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Date: 6/2/2019 1:51:00 PM
Silent one, this is an exceptional poem from you. A well deserved honor of potw!
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Date: 6/2/2019 10:27:00 AM
Yes, I think you are at one with all seasons. Beautiful, thoughtful poetry. A fave for me.
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Date: 6/2/2019 9:50:00 AM
A great choice for POTW..congrats SO..keep writing the gems.
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Date: 6/2/2019 7:01:00 AM
Congrats S O. On POTW, this gem nearly escaped me. Tom.
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Date: 6/2/2019 6:34:00 AM
So beautiful to ponder Silent One! I share Summer as the truer essence of my soul but perhaps a bit of everything seeps in!! Wonderful write and Congratulations !!
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Date: 6/2/2019 6:13:00 AM
Congratulations on POTW, enjoyed!
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Date: 5/30/2019 3:39:00 PM
Some excellent advice here; well done.
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Date: 5/28/2019 10:58:00 PM
I believe you are a man for all season, I love every aspect of you and your poetry, Thank you , be blessed, just got back from a 4 day get away to Mtl. nice to be home, have a great day my friend
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Date: 5/28/2019 10:29:00 PM
Fantastic poem. So creative. So original. Great from start to finish. Have a good day my friend.
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Date: 5/28/2019 9:37:00 PM
This is sooo good, SO. Outstanding...poetry at it's best. Each line as good as the last. Very well done my friend. ~CM
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Date: 5/28/2019 12:19:00 PM
Within the secret garden of our minds, our poem flourish and evolve - Zodiac signs are not always indicative of who we are - how can a world of people be grouped into 12 parts, sections, characters or whatever - they can however indicate certain of our traits, which we choose to accept - do we ever really know ourselves completely? I'd like to think we do! Awesome poem and deep thoughts penned SO. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/27/2019 4:05:00 PM
Yes, you are Spring, Z, because you have lived through the Fall and the cold dark season of Winter but now you've been reborn once again with the exhilarating colors and poetry of Spring in your warm heart and soul. It's called: living and learning through each season of life. Beautiful poem...as usual. FAVED. :D
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Date: 5/27/2019 3:49:00 PM
This is very well-written and thought-provoking, S.O. Self-knowledge is not the simple task some seem to believe it is. Janice
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