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KISS GOODBYE

I’ll leave you a kiss when I leave But I’m off with my lover to Paris The thought of you makes me heave I know all about you and fat Alice You said you were working late But that’s just been a pack of lies You were discovered in bed on that date With that moo with the wobbly thighs Guess that two can play at that game I think its time to call it a day We can both hang our heads in shame As I’ve gone off with her hubby Ray Jan Allison 4th September 2014 Contest: The Poet II Sponsored by Gautami Phookan

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Date: 9/17/2014 5:10:00 AM
It has a good rhyme and you wrote so well! Congrats Jan and thank you for participating in my contest...smiles!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/17/2014 5:21:00 AM
I really enjoyed entering the contest and I thank you for your lovely comments:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/16/2014 1:12:00 AM
Congratulations on the win, Jan. Love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 9/16/2014 1:14:00 AM
Many thanks Gina:-) hugs jan xxx
Date: 9/14/2014 11:13:00 PM
Hey Jan, hope you and Ray have a great time in Paris ;). Fun poem my friend.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:03:00 AM
Ive never been to central Paris - just Eurodisney ... I must meet 'Ray'one day lol Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/14/2014 11:07:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/15/2014 1:02:00 AM
Thanks Dr Mehta:-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 9/14/2014 7:57:00 PM
Back with my congratulations for this poem that keeps me smiling.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/15/2014 1:01:00 AM
If I made you smile i did a good job I like to try and write with humour:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 9/14/2014 6:36:00 PM
Quite the lover's game. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/15/2014 1:01:00 AM
thanks Joyce:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 9/14/2014 2:48:00 PM
Well deserved win Jan...hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/14/2014 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Tim its just made me smile reading it back now:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/5/2014 2:15:00 PM
If you can't beat them, join them. Duh, there I go with music tones again. This time by 'Queen' wunderbar Jan. I'm glad I'm not living next door to Alice, jee's!! there I go again ;-) xx I'm Smokie'ing xx
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2014 2:29:00 PM
who the beep is Alice I remember that version too James LOl. Saw Queen at Knebworth 1986 best gig EVER! Hugs as ever Jan xxx
Date: 9/5/2014 9:51:00 AM
Nice poetic write, nice rhyming, good luck, Jan
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2014 10:16:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Mehta:-) I do appreciate your feedback, Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/5/2014 8:53:00 AM
Getting even isn't hard to do is it..Very emotive and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/5/2014 8:54:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Sara:- Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/5/2014 5:43:00 AM
Tit for tat/ What a funny game/ If both can do it/ Is there any shame? I have enjoyed it! Its well written, funny and profound. An excellent work, dear Jan.
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Date: 9/5/2014 6:07:00 AM
Thank you for the lovely comment Demetrios:-) Where this came from goodness knows but it just flowed from my pen :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/5/2014 2:04:00 AM
Lovely write Jan! Love the humour! Do u think that we will let you leave n can do wid that kiss forever,, no girl! Go in contest!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2014 3:42:00 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Dr Sharma:-) I wonder if stuff like this ever happens - but it is pure fiction on my part - hubby laughed when i read it to him:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/5/2014 1:49:00 AM
Oooh, I love this one, Jan. Betrayal of one partner evokes betrayal from the other. An excellent entry for Guatami's contest! Love, Carolyn
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/5/2014 3:41:00 AM
I have no idea where this came from was going to do sad and ended doing happy:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 9/4/2014 7:13:00 PM
Great humor as always Jan. Well done.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/4/2014 7:14:00 PM
Thanks Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 9/4/2014 6:52:00 PM
Not fair, talking about my thighs...lol this is hysterical and I will be laughing for awhile. BG
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/4/2014 6:57:00 PM
Thanks Barbara. I feel I have done a good job if I make people smile from my poems:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/4/2014 6:40:00 PM
ha! this one cracked me up! i love the line about her "wobbly thighs" - perfect!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/4/2014 6:56:00 PM
I have no idea where this write came from Eileen in fact I was going to do one about kissing my dying dad goodbye - but thankfully silliness won the day:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 9/4/2014 3:38:00 PM
I thought you'd be off with his mother Faye with the hair so gray and perhaps is gay...but I won't say...haha....loved it Jan hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/4/2014 3:41:00 PM
Ohhhh greying men... mmmmmmm Don't start me off Tim! Hugs Jan xxxx
Date: 9/4/2014 2:18:00 PM
Ah revenge is so sweet. I loved this one. :-) Christine
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 9/4/2014 2:20:00 PM
I like the twist at the end :-) Hugs Jan xxx