Kiss

The morning Kiss, like soft dew on a rose. The midday Kiss, sweet as candy that lingers on. The evening Kiss, love~goodnight with heavenly dreams of me. Date Written: 9/13/2021 2 Place Kiss ''K'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/20/2021 11:44:00 AM

Congrats on the win! Very deserving.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/22/2021 11:33:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Kiss write. You say, "Very deserving???" You just made my day. Thank You Very Much. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/17/2021 10:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula! Thanks for reminding us that a welcomed kiss can be "sweet" any time of day. Blessings!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/17/2021 10:51:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this sweet Kiss write. Yes, a Kiss is good anytime of the day. Have a great/blessed day...........

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/15/2021 8:18:00 AM

Very nicely said; also my favorite candy. The world needs more.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/15/2021 11:52:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this sweet write. Yes, the perfect Kiss can also be the candy. Have a great/blessed day...........

Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2021 7:16:00 AM

Paula, congratulations on your win in my "K" Contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/15/2021 11:50:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win in your wonderful "K" contest. Glad you like this one. I enjoyed writing this "Kiss" for your contest. Have a great/blessed day...........

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 9/15/2021 2:16:00 AM

An ode to a perfect kiss, lovely...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/15/2021 11:48:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Yes, to that perfect Kiss. Have a great/blessed day...........

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/14/2021 6:53:00 PM

Wonderful short and sweet Free Verse on Kiss. Congratulations!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/15/2021 11:47:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your congratulations. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this one. Have a great/blessed day...........

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/14/2021 11:19:00 AM

A kiss is a kiss sweet anytime of day dear Paula, thankyou for the lovely write today God bless xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/15/2021 11:45:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. It is an honor to have a win. Glad you like this Kiss write. Have a great/blessed day...........

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/13/2021 6:23:00 PM

How sweet, Paula! So romantic! BW ~ Mala

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/14/2021 9:11:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like this romantic write. Have a great/blessed day...........

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/13/2021 11:48:00 AM

So very well-crafted poem, romantic and lovely, best wishes of luck in the contest.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/14/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thank You, for your note and for your best wishes. Glad you like this write. Have a great/blessed day...........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 9/13/2021 10:13:00 AM

Perfect, Paula! And now this reader has started his day with a kiss. Thanks! Great contest entry, methinks. :) gw

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/14/2021 9:09:00 AM

Thank You, for your note. Glad you like my Kiss write. Have a great/blessed day...........