Keepsakes

His jazz collection fills the spare bedroom
Music man, you see, was his nom de plume

Our wedding album rests on the nightstand
A keepsake for my viewing on demand

The tarnished silver comb that stroked his hair
Lays on the dresser beside his easy chair

The carnation he wore on our wedding day
A keepsake preserved in a glass display

The love notes he sent are bound in a box
I read them again when life deals hard knocks

His old Volvo still sits in the driveway
In it he proposed to his fiancé 

I’ve clung to these treasures, lived in the past
Keepsakes from four years that went by too fast

Comfort they bring as he watches from above
John, my husband, the only man I’ve loved
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Austin Avatar
November 30, 2010 at 1:58 PM
Somehow I missed this one - so tender and loving. The poem is simplicity itself, yet is so, so sincere that I want to shed a tear. Love, Dave
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 4:17 AM
excellent all round my friend
Brown Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations Carolyn on your win in Nikko Palmario's contest "Yah for "K"!". Love, Carol
Fraser Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 7:28 AM
Many congratulations Carolyn on this lovely piece on your memories of John. It's a pleasure to read it, and thank you for sharing >> James :)x
Neels Avatar
October 20, 2010 at 4:19 AM
A favorite of mine.. Congratulations to you, my friend, been hectic whole week, thanks for listening also.. Love Wilma
Mannan Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 9:50 PM
A beautiful touching poem Carolyn. many congratulations for this win.
Dietrich Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:26 PM
Again I say this is wonderful, Carolyn. Congrats for the top ten. LUv, Andrea
Johnson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 3:40 PM
You and Constance were thinking alike for this contest. Very nice. Congratulations Caroline. Love, Joyce
Wilson Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 1:08 PM
So beautiful and touching Caroline! Congratulations!Take care~Deb
Roberts Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 11:10 AM
congrats on your win with this stunningly beautiful tribute
Gorelick Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:42 AM
Oh Sweet LNC..not fair..not fair that you lost John. Congrats on keeping his alive in your poem..and for your win. BG
Freeman Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations Carolyn, on your beautiful "Keepsakes" worthy of a place in the top 10. Agape, Moses
K. Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 8:23 AM
This was another very moving entry that I received for the contest, Carolyn-- congrats with this very beautiful poem-- and how wonderful nonetheless that you have keepsakes to remember him by--they are treasures indeed-- hugs nikko :)
Mehta Avatar
October 19, 2010 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations on the well dserved win in the contest, Carolyn
Dietrich Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 11:34 AM
SAd poem, Carolyn, and it is a window into your treasured memories. I hope you will find a new love on earth! Luv, Andrea
Fraser Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 2:07 PM
A Gem from your heart Carolyn. You deserve happiness girl >> James
Loving Iii Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 8:41 PM
this was a beautful piece. i loved the rhyming; but more important i think it helpd you in some way. i spent part of today talking to a picture. and singing to it too. it helps. john
Chachere Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 4:40 PM
keepsakes are the apart of the heart where the things we cherish most can be buried within, beautiful write from your heart, Caroyln. ~Always&Forever Lynette
Flach Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 8:37 AM
Beautiful tribute. Tears in the office is not a good thing. Thanks for sharing, Joe
Neels Avatar
September 28, 2010 at 7:09 AM
A beautiful, touching tribute to John of the love and the memories that you treasure Carolyn, love Wilma
Rhinem Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 2:34 PM
Smile ~ I remember "Your Beauties Love, 'Beautiful, Carolyn Devonshire!!!'" ~ I do not have a lot of time at the moment dear but I wished to stop by to say "Hello" unto "Your Treasures" before I return soon this eve &, until then, I hope that "Your Beauty" is doing wonderfully dear ~ "My Love to 'You Always,'" John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very Beautiful Evening, 'Beautiful Carolyn Devonshire;'" Bye!:) ~
Walters Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 1:57 PM
This is so bitter-sweet and touching! Memories are precious reminders of happy times. Lovely! Hugs, Kris
Mehta Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 1:47 PM
What a profound memories of the sweet past you have penned, Carolyn.
Anish Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 1:42 PM
Fine tribute to your loved one. I recently published a poem about my father who passed a few months ago. Poetry is not only enjoyable but(as my late father said) it teaches one how to feel. Peace and love Matthew Anish
Locksley Avatar
September 27, 2010 at 1:00 PM
Being surrounded by these memories may be comforting sometimes, but they might also make it hard to get on with your life. Very sad poem, but it does convey the great love you had for John. Sorry for your loss. Diane
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