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Kaleidoscopic - Collab With Jo

Kaleidoscopic - Collab with Jo Enjoying the kaleidoscopic view, As the sky changes to a brilliant hue, Songbirds fly across the clouds to their home, As the azure becomes a salmon dome, Kaleidoscopic hues write twilight prose Silky mauve mingles with scarlet and rose Wispy clouds drift in tufts of pink A coral jubilees when sunset winks. Tangerine sun recedes slow from the scene, Entering demurely is the night queen, What a sight to behold is this sunset! Nothing's more kaleidoscopic as yet! Cerulean queen wears crowns of bright stars White hot clear gems and flaming cinnabars Polar stars spin as gold day slips away Colorful hues kaleidoscopic daze. 4-6-23 Contest: Collab with Jo Sponsor: Jo Daniel Rhyme Scheme: a,a,b,b Ten syllables per line

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I Am Anaya

Date: 5/4/2023 10:09:00 AM

Enchanting, the imagery is stunning, I found Jo's Kaleidoscopic a delight to work with, it seems to me you did as well, it flowed beautifully! "Cerulean queen wears crowns of bright stars" nice" Congratulations on your win, Sam!

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/4/2023 10:36:00 AM

I loved seeing the way each of us interpreted Jo's poem! That is truly one of the beauties of poetry! Her colorful imagery really impacted my sense of a twilight masterpiece and sparked bright pictures of the changing sky. Anaya, thank you so much for your lovely feedback and compliments. So appreciated! Blessings!!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 5/3/2023 6:24:00 AM

This is really beautiful and a perfect blending of talents. Congratulations on your win Sam! :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/4/2023 10:44:00 AM

Thank you so much Linda! Such a delightful experience after I finally got into the cadence and feeling of Jo's wonderfully expressive words. I have always loved twilight - a joyful expression of color and light as night approaches. Sending you blessings!

David Drowley

Date: 5/2/2023 10:27:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Excellent images of the changing sky.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/2/2023 10:38:00 AM

Hi David! Thank you so much. Jo's beautiful poem about sunset and twilight really did inspire me although it took me awhile to really understand the mood of the poem! I'm so glad you enjoyed the imagery! Fun to write. Sending blessings on the wings of beautiful sunsets!

Ann Peck

Date: 5/2/2023 9:16:00 AM

Just beautiful with the gorgeous colors of a kaleidoscope! Congratulations!

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 5/2/2023 4:16:00 AM

Sam - A wonderful collaboration with Joanne, truly beautiful. Congratulations on your win in the contest… Belle

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/2/2023 9:31:00 AM

Hi Belle! Many thanks coming your way! It was a joy to be inspired by Jo's wonderful sunset poem and so much fun to collaborate! The contest really brought out some wonderfully inspired collaborations! Thank you for your note of congratulations. Sending you blessings!!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/2/2023 1:17:00 AM

Brilliant hues shine throughout with some awesome imagery, Sam:) congratulations on your top win:) enjoyed our collab:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 5/2/2023 9:28:00 AM

This was such fun Jo! It took me awhile to get into the the mood of your beautiful poem but, once I did, writing with you about a gorgeous sunset was truly a delightful, and colorful, experience. From now on, I will definitely look at sunsets with a different eye Thank you for your placement - I am honored to place among so many exquisite poems. I hope we get to do this again! Blessings to you. Thank you for sponsoring this contest!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 4/12/2023 1:10:00 AM

Wonderfully done. Love it. Wishing you a win. God bless you. Love, Gina

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/12/2023 10:20:00 AM

Hi Gina! Happy Easter Season to you! So grateful for your lovely message sweet friend! It took awhile to get into the spirit of Jo's poem but in the end it was fun to collab! Sending blessings and hugs!

Valsa George

Date: 4/10/2023 9:11:00 PM

The poem has now become a kaleidoscope of shifting patterns of wonderful hue.... so scintillating and enchanting. Excellent collaboration ! All the best dear Sam.

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/12/2023 10:17:00 AM

Dear Valsa, I loved the thought of a sunset being a kaleidoscope of ever changing colors and patterns. It truly is fleeting moments of enchantment one more beautiful than another until the sunset is gone in the wink of an eye leaving us with memories! I so appreciate your discerning eye and thoughtful words dear friend! I hope Jo likes it! Sending all the blessings of the Easter season!!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2023 11:42:00 AM

way to do the collab . GREAT job

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/12/2023 10:11:00 AM

Hi Andrea! Thank you. It was such fun to dive into a sunset. I know you see amazing sunsets over the mountains! Hope you had a wonderful Easter! Blessings!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 4/7/2023 9:28:00 PM

Sam, this is a marvelous collaboration, with its colorful, magical sunset scenes. Best wishes for the contest. :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 4/12/2023 11:54:00 AM

Thank you so much, Sam. I hope your Easter season is blessed, too. :)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/12/2023 10:09:00 AM

Thank you so much Evelyn! So much fun to write about a brilliant sunset and early evening! Jo's poem was so inspiring! Sending you blessings of Easter season joy and beautiful sunsets over the lake.

Joseph May

Date: 4/7/2023 7:56:00 PM

Beautiful collab guys, I enjoyed the read

Sam Kauffman
Date: 4/7/2023 8:53:00 PM

Hi Joseph! Thank you! Wasn't sure I could make the two poems seem seamless. But, in the end this was great fun! So glad you enjoyed it! Easter blessings of joy!