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Justice Oh Sweet Justice For Contest

You would always grab the biggest slice of cake - Just ignored the fact that I could see Where there were sweets and treats to share Your hand dipped in first before me Yet when I look in the mirror I’ve still got a cracking figure Now you’re the size of an elephant but YOUR butt is ten times bigger! What is your form of justice Sponsor Tammy Reams Jan Allison 23rd August 2015

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James Fraser

Date: 11/21/2015 2:10:00 PM

This reminds me of reminscing from school playground talks. Many a comment has returned, karma ~ cool ~ James xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/21/2015 6:06:00 PM

Karma has come around with this one James - hee hee hee:-) hugs jan xx

Balveen Cheema

Date: 9/10/2015 5:16:00 AM

Jan, this is divine justice! Congrats on your delicious write! Balveen

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2015 6:22:00 AM

Thanks Balveen:-) hugs Jan xx

Anindya Mohan Tagore

Date: 9/9/2015 11:44:00 PM

Hmmm... Haha... Different form of justice... Congrats Jan. Hugs, Bobby

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2015 6:22:00 AM

Sweet Justice lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/9/2015 1:31:00 AM

Very wonderful write Jan n a superb win! Big congrats!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2015 7:27:00 AM

Thanks so much Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 9/8/2015 4:54:00 PM

Congrats for your wonderful piece Jan! ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2015 4:57:00 PM

Many thanks Teddy:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 9/8/2015 2:45:00 PM

No buts about this winning write...Congrats Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2015 2:49:00 PM

LOL thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx

Tammy Reams

Date: 9/8/2015 2:30:00 PM

Wonderful write Jan. I love the butt part! Congrats on your win and thank you for entering into my contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/8/2015 2:49:00 PM

Thanks Tammy it sure is sweet justice:-) hugs Jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 8/23/2015 11:10:00 PM

G'day Jan... poetic justice I'd say using cake as the bait - thanks for the giggle Jan - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 2:48:00 AM

Glad it made you smile:-) hugs jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 8/23/2015 9:17:00 PM

ha! this would surely be sweet justice! nice one, jan...

Jan Allison
Date: 8/24/2015 2:48:00 AM

Thanks Ilene:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/23/2015 4:14:00 PM

wel you got the justice you deserve, jan... uniquely penned!.. amazed!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 4:16:00 PM

Thanks Nette just a fun write ... of sorts lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/23/2015 3:20:00 PM

OH dear!!! :) Well, being of the bigger variety myself, I don't know if justice was served or not! ;) We bigger girls will last longer during a famine....just saying! ;)You go girl....good luck in the contest.

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 3:22:00 PM

LOL Eileen - believe me in this case justice sure was served lol:-) You my friend are divine just the way you are:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 8/23/2015 1:40:00 PM

Tell him to hit the health club and then he can still chase the sweets...good one Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 1:42:00 PM

This is actually about a her not a him -but yes it could refer to either sex:-) hugs jan xxx

Paul Callus

Date: 8/23/2015 11:35:00 AM

Sweet justice and sweet revenge work in witty harmony, Jan! Let her eat her heart out (presuming greedy is a she!). Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 3:02:00 PM

LOL it made Bob laugh when I told him:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 8/23/2015 3:01:00 PM

Ouch! I can vouch that we weren't on the couch:0) silly typo:) hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 1:41:00 PM

We weren't on the couch Paul not that I remember !!!! lol:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus
Date: 8/23/2015 1:25:00 PM

I can couch for a lovely figure, but I can't remember seeing an old gal:) Hugs

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 1:01:00 PM

Beleive me Paul this IS sweet revenge:-) You have met me Paul and can vouch I'm not fat lol - may have had a bit of poetic licence about it being cracking figure but not bad for an old gal lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Eric Boddie

Date: 8/23/2015 11:34:00 AM

greed will really take you far....and once you become bigger than the bar....no longer able to fit inside the car....you will regret all those visits with the cookie jar....lol

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 1:00:00 PM

LOL Eric:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/23/2015 11:15:00 AM

hahaha. SWEET justice. You really took a GREAT way of doing this contest, sweet friend. SEVEN

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 11:25:00 AM

Thanks Andrea - in this case revenge REALLY is sweet!!!! :-) hugs jan xx

Thabang Ngoma

Date: 8/23/2015 7:58:00 AM

Hi Jan..you've got me chuckling:-) very witty write...I'm the worst, but I blame my wife's skill in the kitchen (:heers & best o' Luck in the contest, Tbang

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 10:44:00 AM

Thanks so much Thabang:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 8/23/2015 7:42:00 AM

Hahaha, love this poem, a 7 good luck in the contest. Hugs eve

Jan Allison
Date: 8/23/2015 10:44:00 AM

Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx