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Just Take a Moment

Just take a moment To truly see the colours in a rainbow To truly feel the rain on your face To truly hear natures melodic songs To truly smell the sweet scent of a flower To truly taste the nectar of natures fruit

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Darrell Rose

Date: 3/7/2024 1:46:00 AM

This moment... This Fleeting moment.... Our moment under the sun.... Nice write... Darrell

Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/5/2023 7:44:00 AM

Exactly Deb. Good Morning. Hi. Your words are true for a better life and for peace. May we remember your valuable message. Thank you for sharing your entry. May today find you well. Blessings always (smile)

Deb M
Date: 10/6/2023 2:36:00 AM

Thankyou lovely Lisa! Debx

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 10/1/2023 9:20:00 AM

Life moves too fast, and it is easy to skip over the truly valuable things in life.

Deb M
Date: 10/5/2023 5:04:00 AM

Hear hear Mr Jerry! Hehe….Debx

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/1/2023 7:06:00 AM

Pause for a moment and truly appreciate the essence of existence. Inhale deeply, allowing the vibrant energy of life to fill every fiber of your being. This invaluable counsel is a guiding principle that should be cherished and followed.

Deb M
Date: 10/1/2023 7:50:00 AM

Your comment is so much more poetic than my poem Lasaad hehe!! You write so beautifully! Thankyou….Debx