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Poetry/Personification/Just An Old Shovel
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All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France 

Written, August 15, 2023
For the International Contest, An Old Shovel
Sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 09/17/2023

Second Place

Vintage Gardening Tool Long Y Handle Yard Shovel Circa 1930s Coal Mucking  Out Solid & Sturdy

Once a lovely lady held me in her hands to dig holes, in her beautiful garden full of flowers of all kinds; we were always moving things around, here and there, or planting new- somehow, together we found the space. When finished she would place me against a brick wall, of course, that is after she cleaned me, she was so kind; during the winter she would put me in the garden shed, then, in the spring out I would come to work with her. One day she put me against the wall and I just waited, the day, turned into another day, then weeks, months; the summer ended, autumn came and went, it was cold, I leaned on that wall all winter, I could feel the rusting. Somehow, I knew that lovely lady was gone forever, I was in a dark place as I watched to garden go to waste; oh, wished I could just be thrown in the garbage, then, the summer came and I felt a hand touch me. It was a young woman, so pretty, she said hello, you are just what I need to fix up this old garden; I was so happy to get to work- and we did that day, she told me that this was her gran's home- now hers. Each day we worked and soon the garden was delightful, she would sing as we worked, oh, I loved that so much; and at the end of the day, she cleaned me very well, and placed me safe in the garden shed not against a wall.

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Date: 9/18/2023 3:37:00 PM
Wonderful bitter-sweet personification, Constance. Well done on a worthy win.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2023 12:15:00 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the compliment on my poem and my win.
Date: 9/17/2023 4:04:00 PM
Constance, I enjoyed your delightful poem. For me it highlights the need for patience and to be of use. Congratulations on your excellent win in John’s contest.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2023 12:15:00 PM
Mark, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations.
Date: 9/17/2023 11:44:00 AM
Beautiful story,congratulations on your win.
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Constance La France
Date: 9/19/2023 12:16:00 PM
Eve, thank you so the compliment and congratulations.
Date: 8/22/2023 5:01:00 AM
Beautiful story ! Great personification . The pendulum of life swung for the shovel from joy to sorrow and from sorrow back to joy ! All the Best in the contest dear Constance.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/24/2023 1:28:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, comment, and encouragement, blessings !
Date: 8/21/2023 3:52:00 PM
Nice, Constance. The demise and loss. The next generation and restoration. I love the idea of a 'second time around'. Bless you. Curtis.
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Constance La France
Date: 8/24/2023 1:29:00 PM
Curtis, thank you so much for the compliment a comment, blessings !
Date: 8/15/2023 9:58:00 PM
what wonderful personification Constance i love the happy ending:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 8/15/2023 10:41:00 PM
Jan, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, hugs and blessings !

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