Junk

The old lady down the street has passed
and left no one they could call around;
except her old cat she called Miss Sass
It will take looking before she's found.

Her friend decided on a yard sale.
Mostly junk will be all we will find:
a worn garden spade and battered pail
remnants of flower beds left behind.

A crocheted doily on arms of chair,
placed in front of an ancient TV.
With Bible on table, she took care
as she read, to have a cup of tea.

They found a small trunk just loosely bound
that contained a locket of fine gold.
and a photo that when it was found,
showed three little girls midst bits of mold.

She had three daughters, she had once said,
but they would not visit anymore.
They must not have cared; can't all be dead!
then they found the trunk's wee secret door.

There, a large diamond ring brightly shone
They decided, as they locked the trunk:
Sell, give money to those all alone.
If her girls call, say it was all junk!

March 5, 2023
for Writing Challenge--J Words
by Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:52 PM
Ann, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 12:42 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend!
George Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:24 PM
You gave an unexpected twist to the whole story ! Wonderful imagination, dear Ann. Congratulations on your win !
Peck Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:24 AM
Thanks, dear Valsa! Sadly, it's a tale many elderly could tell.
Seeker Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Dramatic conclusion to the story! Love it! Congratulations on your win, Ann
Peck Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:23 AM
Thank you, Seeker, for your nice comments! The poem probably describes a lot of uncared-for parents.
Fowler Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 1:06 PM
Ha Ann. Revenge is sweet reward? Congratulations on your win! :)
Fowler Avatar
March 12, 2023 at 3:59 PM
LOL
Peck Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 2:54 PM
Yeah! Revenge of the poet! (which I'm sure would just terrify) :)
Clear Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 12:30 PM
Just the best depiction of what can happen but your ending was such a suprise! Love your thoughts! suzanne
Peck Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:16 AM
Thanks, Suzanne! I imagine there are many like that elderly woman.
Andresen Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 9:51 AM
- I'm sure she had many treasures...congratulations on your win, Ann :) - hugs
Peck Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:14 AM
At least they were treasures to her. Thanks, Sunshine!
Buehler Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 4:27 PM
A captivating story, with a satisfying ending, Ann. I enjoyed it a lot. :)
Peck Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 2:58 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! And I love your Velvet poem!
Dietrich Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 6:27 AM
GOOD. Give the ingrates nothing from the diamond sell!!
Peck Avatar
March 7, 2023 at 4:24 PM
Exactly! Not often you get to do that. Thanks, Andrea. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 1:47 AM
Loved your poem. Great ending.
Peck Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 2:57 PM
Thanks, Victor. It felt good to give those girls what they deserve! :)
Daniel Avatar
March 6, 2023 at 1:44 AM
A wonderful poem that depicts the harshness of life, Ann, great twist to end it:)
Peck Avatar
March 8, 2023 at 1:36 PM
Thanks, Jo! Growing old alone knowing your daughters could help...a sad picture.
Faulkner Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:13 PM
I like the details of the crocheted doily and the locket with the old photo, such a melancholy story of loneliness but I like the surpise treasure at the end~
Peck Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:58 PM
I remember those doilies on every piece of furniture! :) I couldn't let those girls get away with being mean! Thanks for your comments!
Lawless Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:09 PM
Nicely poured with a twist Ann.
Peck Avatar
March 5, 2023 at 3:59 PM
Ah, I love your comments :)
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