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The old lady down the street has passed and left no one they could call around; except her old cat she called Miss Sass It will take looking before she's found. Her friend decided on a yard sale. Mostly junk will be all we will find: a worn garden spade and battered pail remnants of flower beds left behind. A crocheted doily on arms of chair, placed in front of an ancient TV. With Bible on table, she took care as she read, to have a cup of tea. They found a small trunk just loosely bound that contained a locket of fine gold. and a photo that when it was found, showed three little girls midst bits of mold. She had three daughters, she had once said, but they would not visit anymore. They must not have cared; can't all be dead! then they found the trunk's wee secret door. There, a large diamond ring brightly shone They decided, as they locked the trunk: Sell, give money to those all alone. If her girls call, say it was all junk! March 5, 2023 for Writing Challenge--J Words by Constance La France

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Date: 4/3/2023 3:52:00 PM
Ann, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/14/2023 12:42:00 PM
Congrats on your win, my friend!
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Date: 3/9/2023 6:24:00 PM
You gave an unexpected twist to the whole story ! Wonderful imagination, dear Ann. Congratulations on your win !
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/10/2023 9:24:00 AM
Thanks, dear Valsa! Sadly, it's a tale many elderly could tell.
Date: 3/9/2023 6:15:00 PM
Dramatic conclusion to the story! Love it! Congratulations on your win, Ann
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/10/2023 9:23:00 AM
Thank you, Seeker, for your nice comments! The poem probably describes a lot of uncared-for parents.
Date: 3/9/2023 1:06:00 PM
Ha Ann. Revenge is sweet reward? Congratulations on your win! :)
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 3/12/2023 3:59:00 PM
LOL
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/11/2023 2:54:00 PM
Yeah! Revenge of the poet! (which I'm sure would just terrify) :)
Date: 3/9/2023 12:30:00 PM
Just the best depiction of what can happen but your ending was such a suprise! Love your thoughts! suzanne
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/10/2023 9:16:00 AM
Thanks, Suzanne! I imagine there are many like that elderly woman.
Date: 3/9/2023 9:51:00 AM
- I'm sure she had many treasures...congratulations on your win, Ann :) - hugs
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/10/2023 9:14:00 AM
At least they were treasures to her. Thanks, Sunshine!
Date: 3/8/2023 4:27:00 PM
A captivating story, with a satisfying ending, Ann. I enjoyed it a lot. :)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/11/2023 2:58:00 PM
Thank you, Evelyn! And I love your Velvet poem!
Date: 3/7/2023 6:27:00 AM
GOOD. Give the ingrates nothing from the diamond sell!!
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/7/2023 4:24:00 PM
Exactly! Not often you get to do that. Thanks, Andrea. :)
Date: 3/6/2023 1:47:00 AM
Loved your poem. Great ending.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/11/2023 2:57:00 PM
Thanks, Victor. It felt good to give those girls what they deserve! :)
Date: 3/6/2023 1:44:00 AM
A wonderful poem that depicts the harshness of life, Ann, great twist to end it:)
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/8/2023 1:36:00 PM
Thanks, Jo! Growing old alone knowing your daughters could help...a sad picture.
Date: 3/5/2023 3:13:00 PM
I like the details of the crocheted doily and the locket with the old photo, such a melancholy story of loneliness but I like the surpise treasure at the end~
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/5/2023 3:58:00 PM
I remember those doilies on every piece of furniture! :) I couldn't let those girls get away with being mean! Thanks for your comments!
Date: 3/5/2023 3:09:00 PM
Nicely poured with a twist Ann.
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Ann Peck
Date: 3/5/2023 3:59:00 PM
Ah, I love your comments :)

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